Dumb Law and Order fanfic monents

Rated R!!!!

A/N so this chapter is rated R people ..18+ ok....I know you guys under 18 are still gonna read it but hey at least i warned ya (I'm under 18 lol)

so the sex scenes....trust me I love a good sex scene like thats why I read the book .....dont even try to deny it, you guys know that a good sex scene makes the book amazing lol so dont hate bitchez....but we all know haterz gon hate so on with the chapter....

that moment when the author tries to wtite smut and it looks like this..."narrator: elliot and olivia had gotten into a heated argument earlier that day in the squadroom, it had even gotten to the point where olivia had slapped  him..." ....sounds like a good book right??I was enjoying it until I read this....."that night elliot went to her apartment to apologize..olivia was at home on her couch watching a very intense episode of scandal when she heard a knock at the door "oh come on"she shrugged as she got of the couch and walked to the door,after checking the peep hole she swung open the door "elliot what are you doing here?" "I came to check on you, you left the squad room pretty angry today" "well im fine,so you can leave now!"she said getting pissed and annoyed at his presence...just then elliot crashed his lips into hers and surprisingly she kissed back ....for 10min. they were kissing not breaking away for oxygen as their tongues fought for dominance  just then elliot started to push her back into the apartment and kicked the door closed with his foot....he pushed her down on the couch not breaking the kiss...after kissing for ten more minutes elliot finally broke the kiss,he then ripped off her t-shirt ,and started humping and pumping into her,she moaned and then they continued making sex the rest of the night..."

...like legit the book was exactly like that lol...there are SO many wrong things happening in that chapter ...his lips crashed into hers...call a bus!!call a bus!! there's been a lip-mobile  accident....I swear that was the first thing goin through my mind lol...and then like who the fuck can kiss for 20FUCKING MINUTES without  breaking apart for air......and how the fuck is he humping and pumping and you two are still completely dressed ,well except for liv cuz she aparently shops at the dollar store...ripped off her t-shirt my ass...and then like is this a new thing making sex cuz last time I checked people make love and have sex ......then thers that classic line our tongues fought for dominance  and im l left wondering where the fuck can I witness these tongue battles ?? do the tongues have armors and swords??do they win prizes!!