.Chapter 1.

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Guten Tag my fellow rats!

Back with a revised Doctor Who story, which believe it or not this was my first story on wattpad that everyone liked. I think.

So, I created a new character, Elizabeth Barnes. We're starting with Ninth Doctor to have an establishment of a relationship. This was like the same as the other times I rewrote this story.

So, enjoy this rewrite. :)

-lizzzzzzzzzzzzz

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"Elizabeth!"

A groan from a pile of blankets interrupted the silence in the room. "Elizabeth!"

Thump!

The lump was now on the floor, and hair was poking out from underneath. The lady mumbles and wipes the extra drool off of her face. She glanced at the clock that read 07:19 am. "Lord help me,"

"Lizabeth, Rose is gonna be here any minute! Wake up!"

Up in a flash, Elizabeth Barnes grabs a pile of clothes and dashes to the bathroom. She brushed her teeth while she ran a comb through her mass of matted hair. The girl pulled on her skinny black jeans and a red flannel shirt. She pulled on her socks and laced up her red converse. She opened the door and looked at her wristwatch.

"Hm, two minutes. The new record," Elizabeth mumbles. "Wow, what a great way to start the day, Liz, " A voice next to her said. A young blonde female appeared in the hallway with a glass cup full of a fruit smoothie.

"Mom, make smoothies?" The brunette asked the blonde. In reply, her best friend nodded and shuffled back to the small kitchen with Elizabeth in tow. "Strawberry and banana, your favorite." Her mom said handing her a glass.

"Thanks, mom." The two Barnes women hug, and Elizabeth chugs the smoothie. "Alright, off you pop. You have jobs to get too."

"Yes, mom." Elizabeth rolled her eyes and shoved Rose towards the door.

The two race down to the bus stop where they were picked up by a red double-decker. The two waited by the entrance, holding onto the bar.

"Got lunch with Mickey again?" Elizabeth asked as she watched the civilians walk. "Yep, you can join if you want too," Rose said as the bus stopped. "Nah, it's alright. I have a good book in the break room. I'm almost done with it anyway." Elizabeth said.

The two hopped off the bus and raced towards the entrance of Henrik's shopping mall. "See you later, nerd," Rose yelled and made her way to the clothing department. However, Elizabeth made her way to the furniture department.

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"Ms. Barnes, this is the third time I will tell you, please get off the sofas and stop reading! Do your job!" Her supervisor shouted from the walkway.

"Yes, Mr. Johnson." She rolled her eyes and spied a clock that showed 12:34. Elizabeth sprang out of the chair and raced to the backroom after calling, "I'm taking a lunch break."

"Hello, Elizabetty," Rose said swiveling a chair. "Oh god, what do you want now?" The brunette asked.

"Come with me, come see Mickey." Rose sighed putting on her best puppy dog face.  Elizabeth glared at the blonde knowing she will win.

"Fine," Elizabetty groaned and let Rose pull her out of the break room and to the entrance of the store. Immediately, the two spotted Rose's boyfriend and rushed over to him.

"Hello, Mickey Mouse," Lizzie called.

" Well, it seems Rose finally convinced you after all." Mickey smirks and hands Rose a sandwich. "I got extras, want one?"

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