I'm done

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Recently, u have been struggling. I have been trying to find a good point in where the plot should connect with the mystery.

I can't seem to find any.

Which leads me to say this.











































































I'm remaking this book.

Hear me out.

1. There are so many errors i find with this book.
2. "Sans" doesn't even act like Sans. Sans is lazy, which u got sort of right, and mostly just chill.
3. He will stay Uke, but he won't have to always look up to others to defend him. That's the problem with this book. While Sans has the ability to kill a human with ease, this book says that he can't even stand up for himself.
4. I'm just going to remake thus book and actually put the "Sans" character to (M/N).
5. I'm doing this to include some parts to the story, because I don't feel like spending aboutg two weeks redoing the chapters, and to also add more backstory instead of just skipping times and more gaps.

So those are just a few things. The story will be kind of different, but itf will be better.

Hopefully.

So yeah, this is me saying goodbye to this book.

I am working on the their chapter as we speak. I'm going to post three chapters a week for this book. Bye guys.

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