Dear ARMY Writer,
We invite you in with our fullest hearts. At the time you feel you need the Magic Shop - when you want your story, your voice to be heard - the door to the magic shop will become visible to you.
We're ready to listen to your story...
Cover and First Impressions: 5/5 Attention Grabbing: 5/5 Unique Storyline: 9/10 Good Grammar: 10/10 Story Arch: 10/10 Believable Characters: 10/10
"The cover is beautiful. The authors writing is wonderful. I kept reading until I fell asleep. I had to read 2 chapters over because I don't remember them. A cliché of sorts, but one that's not seen as often. The author knows how to build their story and kept it interesting."
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Cover and First Impressions: 4/5 Attention Grabbing: 5/5 Unique Storyline: 9/10 Good Grammar: 10/10 Story Arch: 8/10 Believable Characters: 8/10
"I honestly thought it was a romance texting story. I was wrong. I love the photo of Jin the author used. I wanted to see where the author was going to go with it. I can honestly say that I've come across a handful or 2 of this kind of storyline. They're usually about any one of the maknae line or Yoongi though, not Jin. It was refreshing. Jin truly has the mind of a serial killer in this one. I don't remember too many, if any at all, grammatical errors. That is the first and last thing I notice and it sticks with me. I felt a little build up and then it hit me like the pavement after falling off a building. It was abrupt but it definitely was NOT uninteresting. This is my favourite that I've been assigned to read so far."
Cover and First Impressions: 5/5 Attention Grabbing: 3/5 Unique Storyline: 8/10 Good Grammar: 9/10 Story Arch: 8/10 Believable Characters: 10/10
"Cover is perfect. Plot is good. The description is classy and detailed, but is a bit close to too much making the story slow, for the starting chapters at least. And due to that, I think the story grabs attention of the readers(because of the skilful writing and description), but does not entices much(because the pace feels slow). Grammar is perfect; good use of vocabulary. Spelling mistakes spotted; even the names of the characters have spelling mistake( 3 different versions of the name 'Maram' was identified). Characters are realistic and relatable. Progression is smooth. A very well written story."
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