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We have a two-way tie for both 2nd place and 3rd place.


1st Place
Purple Death | A BTS Murder Mystery by bangtancha

Judged by -An9e1-
49/50 points, 98%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 5/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 10/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 10/10

"Good cover and blurb, I would definitely read this on my own time. I've read this kind of story before, I've even written it. But I've never read a version written as well as this one. Honestly you had me hooked from the first page. There's such good lines in this. One of the best books I've discovered on this site."

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2nd Place
Peter Pan Syndrome by Pamera12

Judged by -An9e1-
46/50 points, 92%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 8/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 10/10

"I like the cover and the blurb is attention grabbing. Right away there are some obvious grammar mistakes, which can often put a new reader off the story. I would suggest editing the story, especially the first chapter or two. The story itself is entertaining and very enjoyable to read. It has very beautiful scenes which make it easy to get through."

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2nd Place
Slowly and Painfully by NocturnalArmys 

Judged by JungJoon939
46/50 points, 92%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 9/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 9/10

"It is slightly unique, and very interesting. I think I would have read it if it was recommended to me." 

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3rd Place
Ups & Downs [BTS Short Story] by Crystal_TanJin  

Judged by JungJoon939 
45/50 points, 90%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 9/10
Story Arch: 9/10
Believable Characters: 9/10

"It is interesting and the moment smoothly builds up with the chapters. There weren't many grammar or spelling mistakes." 

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3rd Place
to all the boys i've loved before by taehphoria 

Judged by -An9e1-
45/50 points, 90%

Cover and First Impressions: 2/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 10/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 10/10

"Covers that have the title on it are more likely to get clicks. Also the exposure is pretty high so it's hard to see. I like the blurb though it give hardly any information. The grammar was stylised and it fit the theme, it works really well. It's so beautifully written, I really love the letters. Wasn't a huge fan of the ending, I thought she should've ended up with Jimin. Not docking points for that though, obviously it's just my opinion. Thanks for a beautiful ride."

  

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