💐 Yoongi

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1st Place
After Rain by sarunibts  

Judged by yoonzhik
45/50 points, 90%

Cover and First Impressions: 4/5
Attention Grabbing: 5/5
Unique Storyline: 8/10
Good Grammar: 10/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 8/10

"I loved the writing. It felt like living the situation and made me want to read on."

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2nd Place
3500 calories by saltyagust 

Judged by shalzDSVPN
42/50 points, 84%

Cover and First Impressions: 4/5
Attention Grabbing: 5/5
Unique Storyline: 8/10
Good Grammar: 8/10
Story Arch: 9/10
Believable Characters: 8/10

"The plot is really unique because I haven't come across such bts books and I like the cover because I can imagine yoongi in that outfit inside the restaurant. The book has a few grammatical errors, which I'm sure the author can edit and improve on. I loved the scientific facts in the prologue and how the protagonist's emotions are depicted. It contains a sensitive topic which isn't glorified and the female protagonist's emotions leaves the readers understand what she's doing is wrong and learn from their story."

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3rd Place
Liar by MochiNovi

Judged by yoonzhik
40/50 points, 80%

Cover and First Impressions: 4/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 8/10
Good Grammar: 9/10
Story Arch: 8/10
Believable Characters: 7/10

"Sometimes the conversations felt unnatural and didn't flow well. Nice writing and plot."

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