🌻 Hoseok

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We have a three-way tie for 1st place.


1st Place
Click by xchasingdreamz

Judged by simple_july
42/50 points, 84%

Cover and First Impressions: 4/5
Attention Grabbing: 3/5
Unique Storyline: 8/10
Good Grammar: 8/10
Story Arch: 9/10
Believable Characters: 10/10

"The plot was interesting. It was refreshing to see Hoseok suffer along with the OC. Many emotions, preferably shock, has taken ahold of me as I went along the story. Hoseok's death was surprising but the last part gave me goosebumps. The writing style was clear and straight to the point, perfectly understandable with minor grammar mistakes. I also like how the author poured herself into the OC, showing confidence and bravery. Keep writing!"

 Keep writing!"

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1st Place
Save Me by mirabilia-

Judged by NayanaVadakkekara
42/50 points, 84%

Cover and First Impressions: 2/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 8/10
Story Arch: 9/10
Believable Characters: 10/10

"Cover is not the best. The book grabs attention, thanks to the brilliant writing style and the much appreciated ambiguity it permeates. Plot is very good, but not on the unique side, some of events could be guessed, but it's also a positive thing at times, because it means the readers could connect to the characters. But the characters are not just like an open book as well, their development was showing. Grammar needs improvement. Tenses needs to be taken care of, and punctuations should be used widely. Vocabulary is good. Progression was smooth, except the fact the time sequence could be much more distanced. Everything was happening fast, seemed like the events were thrown deliberately. But it's not that unreal as well, sometimes fate can be such in real life too; throwing events all together. Personally, I felt it was a bit unreal. A very interesting book. A sensitive book, I must say, like the book itself possesses emotions. Emotions are displayed in the best way possible. Kept me crying wherever needed."

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