The Magic Shop Awards 2019 CLOSED

🥀 Taehyung

We have a three-way tie for third place.

1st Place
Rent-a-Prince mallalux

Judged by Devanna19
47/50 points, 94%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 5/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 9/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 9/10

"The cover and blurb encourage you to read it. You are immediately sucked into the story and the important details are laid out right away. I haven't come across anything like this before. Good concept with good execution. There are some slight mistakes but overall grammar is good and level of writing is appropriate. The story progresses at a decent rate. The author takes the time to build but doesn't drag. Both main characters are portrayed realistically and their internal struggles are well-written. I love it and I'm looking forward to more." 

2nd Place
Prison in colors by nourhaneauxtoumanion

Judged by coffeedate
43.5/50 points, 87%

Cover and First Impressions: 5/5
Attention Grabbing: 5/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 8/10
Story Arch: 8.5/10
Believable Characters: 8/10

"A beautiful creation, this way! I really liked the plot and the characters and just the format of the story. Sometimes the sentence structure was a little messy but I really enjoyed the plot!"

3rd Place
True or False by taevxgucci

Judged by Devanna19
36/50 points, 72%

Cover and First Impressions: 4/5
Attention Grabbing: 1/5
Unique Storyline: 7/10
Good Grammar: 6/10
Story Arch: 10/10
Believable Characters: 8/10

"Author has an intriguing storyline but it's hard to get into it because of how weird the words used are. I recommend the author focus on writing more casually (it's okay to not use five different synonyms for "look" or "said"). This will be less distracting to the reader and allow them to really get into the story. Despite this, I'm looking forward to the next update." 

3rd Place
The Blood Trial by abangtan01

Judged by Devanna19
36/50 points, 72%

Cover and First Impressions: 3/5
Attention Grabbing: 4/5
Unique Storyline: 8/10
Good Grammar: 7/10
Story Arch: 8/10
Believable Characters: 6/10

"Interesting idea, loved the red dress episode. Author should maybe make Taehyung slightly less brutal. It doesn't fit with him being kind towards Yujin. The author states from the beginning that English is not their first language. Obviously there are mistakes but I think considering that, it is still decently written." 

3rd Place
Just Pregnant With My Ex-Girlfriend's Baby by Savaginity

Judged by coffeedate
36/50 points, 72%

Cover and First Impressions: 3/5
Attention Grabbing: 3/5
Unique Storyline: 9/10
Good Grammar: 7/10
Story Arch: 7/10
Believable Characters: 7/10

"I love the idea and plot! The characters were funny and there were so many extras, I loved it! The grammar was kinda off but I didn't think much of it. I just really enjoyed the story!"