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The power within(not permanent title)

Fantasy

I wrote a story that is loosely based around my favorite series to date, Percy Jackson. So... constructive criticism only please tell me what I can do better.

#constructive #create #criticism #donthate #fantasy #letsgetthisbread #magic #nerd #percyjackson #plzvote #unlimitedpride #willtolive

This isnt part of the story but...

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I need help figuring out where this is going 

                          
Should they be demigods? 

                          
just magic 

                          
Or other?
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