Save me (Severitus)

Chapter 1

AUTHORS NOTE: Hi :) if you haven't read the description basically this a father son relationship between Harry and Snape. I don't think I will write any romantic relationships I kinda want to focus on them and how they grow. This is my first Wattpad story, I have a story planned but I'm open to suggestions <3 >•<
THIS IS NOT A SNARRY STORY FOR THE LOVE OF CHRIST

If that's your thing cool but don't associate this with Snarry because I'm super uncomfortable with it.

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Harry's POV [point of view children :) ]

    After my parents died I was dropped off here, I was too young, and deprived of the knowledge that people cared and were waiting for my arrival at a freaking magic school, all I knew was that I was a freak and I should be grateful that my aunt and uncle were willing to take me in.

    At four the belt was introduced. At five cooking was my duty. At six the garden was my job. At seven the entire house was my job. Eight was the first time Dudley ever tried to stop Uncle Vernon, as you can guess that didn't end up well, for me of course. At nine I deserved to die. Now we're in the present, age ten. The day I got the worst beating of my life, but also saved by a man I would later love more than anything.

    "BOY DID YOU THINK TELLING ANYONE WOULD HELP YOU?!" Uncle Vernon screamed. I was the size of an eight-year old. I had freak, worthless and useless mentally scarred in my brain, little did I know those were going to become scars. Earlier I had been to the neighbors house and pleaded with her. Of which now I understand was stupid of me. She unfortunately can't keep her mouth closed. I'll spare the details of that night. I couldn't breathe I felt like I was going to die and I deserved it. I had deserved death since I had been born according to my aunt and uncle and I didn't have any reason not to believe them.

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Snape's POV

    "Why would I do that Albus?" I sneered. Sure I made a promise to Lily to keep the boy safe, but he was surly getting treated like a prince.

    "Please Severus, just check up on him," Albus pleaded. His sparkle gone he looked too concerned for me.

    "Fine," I growled out. I don't want to go check on the brat with his pictures plastered everywhere and his every wish being answered.

    "Thank you Severus, if something is wrong bring him here immediately," Albus said. 'My god' I thought, nothing is going to be wrong with the little spawn.

    I flooed to the squibs house. I could be doing so many other things right now I do not want to deal with this crazy cat lady.

    "Good evening, Professor," she purred out like a cat.

    "I'm going to check on Potter," I sneered. This house was just disgusting. So many... cats. I simply had to leave. I rush out the door making sure I don't say goodbye. I don't know why I flooed here I should've just apparated.

    "Well I'm going back when I leave," I grimaced in my head. I slowly walked up to the door seeing that it was 2am here I didn't expect the muggles to be awake.

    "Alohomora," I whispered. I slowly walked immediately smelling blood and dirt coming from a cupboard. Can't they keep a cupboard clean for god's sake...

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Author:
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I'm sorry I swear I will get more detailed :)
Any hints, ideas or tips would be greatly appreciated! I have horrible grammar and
I'm not the best writer so let me know on anything I can improve on! Luv anyone actually reading this <3 (also I know this is kinda vague but I think I'm going to have them explain what happened later in greater detail so sorry if this comes off bad, but if you wouldn't like me to do that please let me know)