Derp Face (Ssundee fanfic)

The pain

Ian's POV

I was talking to Mitch when I blacked out. My first thought was, "Did Mitch punch me?" No, he wouldn't do that. My second thought was, "Did someone punch Derp?" Even in the blackness, I was happy. No one has ever done that before. But then the pain came. It was so hard to concentrate. Just so much pain. Could the person who hit Derp kill him? Or in that matter, kill us both?

McKenzie's POV

I put my hands up to my face, which was in shock. I had totally forgot about Ian. I whispered to Derp,"I'm sorry." I kept whispering that until Squeaker touched my shoulder. She said, "We need to go." She had to drag me. I kept saying I'm sorry. My head was pounding, the burns hurting like crazy. Was I going insane? But I couldn't do it. I stopped and even Squeaker couldn't move me. I said, "I'm sorry." Squeaker looked at me, fear in her eyes. I shot water at her, stunning her only for a minute, but in that minute, I ran. I didn't even know where I was running. I ran until I couldn't. Before we were in a desert, now I was in a snow biome. I sat down and watched as the little snowflakes fell. I watched and didn't  think about anything except that, "These snowflakes are so pretty." After about an hour, I realized I wasn't getting cold. In fact I was perfectly warm. The snow made me feel peaceful, and the rain made me feel the same way. I closed my eyes with a smile on my face, but only for a moment. I had to keep moving.

Ian's POV

Why pain, must you come? I heard, "I'm sorry." Over and over. It was McKenzie! As I heard it, I felt the pain going away, only to replace a different pain. The pain of McKenzie being away. I felt the blackness go away, and I saw Mitch. I looked around. I was still at Mitch's house. Mitch looked at me in surprize, "You woke up!" I nodded. I looked outside, and it was raining. I wondered if that was from McKenzie. I got up, but I was a little wobbly. Mitch steadied me. I shook him off, as I slowly went outside, into the rain. My hands ran through my hair which was now wet. I sat there, not caring about getting hypothermia. I looked across the way. A girl was sitting there watching the snowflakes. She looked so peaceful. She got up and closed her eyes, but only for a moment. Then she ran in my direction. I thought I reconized the face, and it was McKenzie. She kept running until she ran right into me. We both went to the ground. She looked at me, surprize in her eyes, "You're.." I cut her off, with a kiss. She looked at me, I said, "I missed you. " I thought she'd say, I missed you too, but she said sadly, "I'm sorry." I told her fiercly, "You're the one who got me out of the blackness. You're the one who replaced the pain. You're the one I love." My eyes softened, "I love you McKenzie." Tears sprang into her eyes, she was going to say something when I heard a girl scream. McKenzie's eyes widened, "SQUEAKER!" She ran where the scream was, but I couldn't move. My hand had gone down. I screamed, "WAIT!" McKenzie stopped, wonder in her eyes,  she came back to me, "Squeaker is my friend though." Her hand went to my chin. I could see the burns on her arms. I told her, "I can't move." 

McKenzie's POV

I had to save Squeaker. I told Ian, "I will punch Derp right in his stupid face." Ian said, "I could die from that." Ian's eyes said, I don't want you to go. But I ignoreed them, and told him, "Squeaker needs me." And I ran where I heard the scream. 

It didn't take me long. I figured why that's why Ian couldn't move. I hid in the grass and watched Derp torture Squeaker. He sometimes stabbed her with a sword and I could tell she was getting weak. I stood up. I called, "Hey Derp. I'm the one you want, take me and let Squeaker go!" Derp looked at me, and laughed. He took Squeaker, and threw her. He threw her really far, and I guessed he threw her to Ian, so he could watch her suffer. I slapped Derp. His hand went to his face. My eyes filled with anger. I called all the water to me. As it gathered, it formed a sphere. Derp punched me in the face. I screamed, a terrible, loud scream. I'm sure everyone heard it. Derp put his hands to his ears but he had the chance to punch me in the other eye. I fell to the ground, welcoming the blackness.

I was on my knees, surounded in water. The water was protecting me. No one could get at me. Of course I couldn't see anyone. I listened, but I couldn't hear anything except the water. I whispered, "You can go now." The water wisped away. I listened. It was Ian's voice, I think he gasped when he saw me. I couldn't stand up, for I didn't know where I was going. Ian picked me up and I fell asleep on his chest.

Ian's POV

After McKenzie left, I just kinda stood there. I looked in the air and an object was coming at me. It was a girl. She had multiple scars. She whimpered, I crouched down because I learned I can make simple movements, like moving my hands and legs, but not walking or swinging my arms. "It's ok. Everything is ok." Then there was a slap on my cheek. McKenzie. I sighed. After tending some of the girl's wounds, there was a scream. A loud terrible scream. Blood rushed to my ears. I put my hands to them. I got up, and knew Derp had left. Sky, Mitch, Fluffy, Jason. Mudkip and Ty were next to me. Jason helped Mudkip try to get the girl on her feet and walk her into a house. Ty, Sky, Mitch Fluffy and I went to the scream. I saw a giant water sphere first, since I had taken the lead, I told the others, "Stay here. I got this." Sky gave me a look of annoyance but stayed there. There was a whisper and the water floated away. I saw McKenzie, she had two black eyes on her face, both at her eyes. I picked her up and carried her back to the village. Once Ty, Sky, Mitch and Fluffy saw that I had McKenzie, they started to walk to the village.

Hello

I feel really bad, for my friend, McKenzie. I just basically gave her two black eyes. NOT IN REAL LIFE! Anyways, I hope you enjoyed. Squeaker, I'm sooooooooo sorry. XD I made you suffer. 

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