Okay... So I was on the holy app of pinterest and I found this website that is supposed to help me edit my stuff. Grammarly has failed me, hopefully this won't. If you are wondering what the website is, it's called hemingwayapp.com. The website kind of offended me tho because it said that my readability was grade 1. I mean I know I'm not that good, but I'm at least a third or fourth grade level.
Update: It doesn't save. I wrote a lot on it and my laptop started updating and it didn't save. IT DIDN'T SAVE NOW I TO REWRITE IT!
'Update for the update': I'm kind of happy it deleted most of it because this is better than what I had written. It's better the second time.
Word count- 1206
During lunch I went to go and pick up everything I needed for school from my teachers. After that I went to lunch and waited in line to get food. Lots of people were surrounding me. Why can't they go away? Once I paid for my lunch, I headed for an empty table near the back of the room. People followed me to the table. Aren't I allowed to eat lunch in peace? I am not a social person when I'm hungry. Well, that's not true. I just don't feel like being near them. They ask too many questions. As they say, "Curiosity killed the cat." And of course the second half, "But satisfaction brought it back," to annoy me to death with all it's questions. I started to eat my lunch when I saw a glimpse of blonde hair plop down next to me.
"Hey, Marinette. Quite the popular one I see," I rolled my eyes.
"Not by choice," I comment, turning my head to see Adrien. "I would think you would be sitting near Chloe, she seems very fond of you." Adrien scratched the back of his neck
"Chloe is a really good friend, but sometimes she can be... a little much." He started to eat his lunch.
"Do you know where Nick is?"
He took a few seconds to finish chewing before he answered, "Yeah, didn't he tell you? He got excused from class for today to pick up his girlfriend from the train station. They are going on a date afterwards too." He never told me this. (It's so funny how words can sound so weird if you don't use conjunctions. Like, 'Yeah, did not he tell you?' or would you say it like 'Yeah, he did not tell you?')
"Do you know who his girlfriend is," I took a bite out of my food.
As he was about to answer Stella sat down next to me. "Do you know what they made me do in my classes?!? Work! They. Made. ME. WORK! So now I have all this useless information floating around my head about whatever the Heck dog ball is."
"It's actually dodge ball, Stella." I pointed out. She didn't hear me, or she just didn't acknowledge what I had said. She complained about her day for a while until the rest of the Winx came from their classes.
XX TIME SKIP BROUGHT TO YOU BY KIKO (totally forgot about him Sry.) XX
The day was such a blur, I can't remember what we did in ELA. When the last bell rang I sprinted to my locker to collect my stuff. I dashed to the door determined not to run into anyone. I would meet up with Winx later. I was only a few feet from the door when I ran head first into the same blonde blob as before. Falling on my butt from the collision. Dang it, it's like he pops out of nowhere! You know what? When I get home I'm going to look him up and try to see why he seems so familiar to me. I rubbed my head, "Hey, are you okay?" Adrien held out his hand to me offering to help me up. He reminds me of Cat Boy. "Why are you in such a rush, I mean school isn't that terrible. Or, are you trying to avoid someone?"
"Well, being in school for 6-7 hours a day, 5 days a week, for 25 weeks, for 10 months, for 12 grades plus college and don't forget. And don't forget that half the stuff we learn in school we won't use in the real world." I did the thinking man pose, "Yeah, but what do I know. And, no, I wasn't trying to avoid every annoying person and their stupid questions. And thank you, Adrien for adding on to their questions." I picked up my bag that I dropped. All of my books and homework were scattered all over the floor. I hunched over and started to gather up my stuff. Adrien started helping me. We were both stuck in an awkward silence while we were picking up my things. Maybe I was too harsh. I should apologise. I shouldn't have been so sarcastic and annoyed. He has done nothing wrong to me. I sighed. Once we picked up all my books and loose papers I stuffed them into my bag. Once Adrien handed me my books, I looked him in the eyes and I started to apologize. "Adrien, I-"
"ADRIKINSSSS!" I got cut off at the worst moment but someone I was told not to mess with. Chloe (C-low-e) Bourgeois. Do these people plan this??? I mean the worst possible moment for this. She wrapped her arms around his neck. She was a boa constrictor and he was her prey. She isn't going to let go any time soon. She dragged Adrien away to the front of the school where their limos were waiting.
I feel so bad for Adrien. First, I'm mean to him, then Chloe comes and drags him to his doom. WAIT! What if I bring him a croissant for the bakery tomorrow? It could be a way to say sorry for putting up with me. I should get some for the Winx. And Nick... nah he'll be fine. I mean he can get his own. He lives there now. I walked to the hotel. I had gotten to the room before the Winx had. I jumped onto my bed. I stayed there for a few seconds before realizing that I needed to get my computer. I used my magic to float my laptop over to me. Don't judge me, I bet you would do it too if you could.
I signed in and went to google. I clicked the search bar and entered Adrien Agreste. I clicked enter. A picture of Adrien came up and it said underneath him that he was a model for Gabriel Agreste and is in ads. That would be why he seems familiar, I might have seen one of his ads on the way to the hotel. An ad popped up with Adrien for perfume, then another, and another until my screen was full of pop ups. My laptop was quickly heating up. I tried to freeze the bottom a little so it wouldn't overheat. It didn't work. My laptop started to slow down and it continued to crash. Tecna's gonna hate me for asking her to fix this too. That's two devices in the past 24 hours.
I felt my phone vibrate in my pocket, it was a text from Nick:
Hey
Hi, I heard you went on a date with your girlfriend
How come I wasn't told of this!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
ADRIEN KNEW, WHY NOT ME TOO.
SRY
I forgot
I wanted to ask if you wanted to hang out tomorrow
I need to tell you smth
It better be who ur gf is
Wait no
you should bring her
That would be even better
Baby steps
I'm not bringing her
I need to tell you smth
I'm not going to tell you over text
Meet me at the park in front of the school tomorrow
B sure to bring ur gf
I won't
YOU ARE READING
One of The Fairies
Fiksi PenggemarAfter a great tragedy happens at the age of 4 and 5, Marinette goes to live with her Godparents in Gardenia. After odd events kept happening to her, Marinette Dupin-Cheng found out she was a fairy. She has ice magic (ice make magic, gray, comment if...