REVIEW TWO |THE HIDDEN FOREST

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BOOK TITLE:The Hidden Forest
AUTHOR: FrozenMJ

REVIEWER: Nax_00

Summary

Centered around a glorious journey to lesser known Hidden Forest. Richard was inspired mostly by his mothers tragic fate that isolated him and his sister.
The journey was initiated into alter the fate of Bleezie "Queen of Light"
But eventually Richard finds out that the journey isn't meant to be just saving his mother but to be saving the world from a deadly terror!

Copied from blurb.

The Hidden Forest is about a great war that took place twenty years ago, in which the great king of the time died in combat against the devil, Evilore. The Queen of Light (Bleezie) was forced to escape with their son and daughter, Bliss and Richard. Richard and Bliss were prophecised to be great leaders and unite nations, and twenty years later, their journeys begin!

Book review

The Hidden forest is a high-fantasy book that introduces us to many mythical aspects, such as angel's, demons, trolls and much much more! Before we start with the book, let's check out other aspects of it first.

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Cover

The cover is lovely. It gives me mythical vibes and actually makes me want to jump into into this hidden forest. It's beautiful and mysterious, and reflects the theme of your book. Good job!

Title

The title is very well done. The Hidden forest intrigues me as well as makes me wonder about the story itself. Questions like, "What's the secret forest?" And "Why do they need to go there?" Really make me want to find out more!

Blurb

The blurb is not the best. The first half is good and coherent and gives us details as to what they story is about, but then it devolves into a Q&A about the book itself; that's a HUGE no-no. In this 'Q&A section', you've practically spoiled the whole book. Here's an extract:

"What happened?

Things messed up 20 years ago and once again the death of Queen Bleezie had aroused the shades for another war, and this time the cold war ongoing glimpses a fullstop. Richard spontaniously grew eager to get the throne where he is destined to be, "heel" his mother, find his dad and stop EVILORE from destroying the world."

This destroys any intrigue your viewers feel while reading the book. If the whole plot is in the blurb, no one will read it, right?

 If the whole plot is in the blurb, no one will read it, right?

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