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She spent the majority of her life as an outcast, trying to keep her powers hidden from the mortal world. But in a violent turn on events that leaves her heartbroken and scarred, she has had old life swept away and is recruited to Mangiatorvi University in a secret world called Oasis. Under dual mentorship of the crown prince and a gifted fighter with intimacy issues, she manages to earn their loyalty under their training sessions."
But can Gemma take the chance of trusting anyone ever again with her heart still in pieces?"
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Book review
The Fall Of Mangiatorvi is an urban-fantasy book centered around a young girl named Gemma, who possesses strange and unique 'gifts' which she must hide from everyone else. One day when checking her mail, she discovers a golden letter sitting neatly in the pile. A letter from Mangiatorvi University.
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Cover
The cover honestly gives me fighting-ring esque vibes and since Gemma seems to be punching/training with a sandbag in the first chapter, it fits perfectly! It's just the right amount of dark and has a correct focal point to make me want to read the book.
Title
The Fall Of Mangiatorvi, while distinct, Is quite the mouthful. I had to check back a few times to make sure I got the spelling of 'Mangiatorvi' correct aha. While it creates a sense of intrigue and makes me wonder who in gods name Mangiatorvi is, it's easily forgettable. And titles should be able to stick with us and make a reasonable impact on us. Judging from your excellent writing, (which we'll get into in just a moment!) It would be a shame to want to read more only to have the dilemma of forgetting the name of the lovely novel.
Blurb
"Gemma Maxey has always been different."
Now that's a nice opener. At first I though, "Oh my, is this one of those 'I'm not like other girls' thing?" But reading on into the blurb I slowly got more and more into it. It has the right amount of mystery and tangible plot to pull me in.
The thing with long blurbs is that, (while lovely if you want to have a nice summary of your book, personally I'm just fine with them), they provide a wall of text for us to read and that (sadly) pushes some readers away. I've noticed that keeping a blurb purposefully vague makes me immediately click more. Of course, each reader has their own preference.
