Let Olympus fall

The Quest 1 part 2

Hey everyone, it's me again.. And I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this story so that I can improve it.
That's all. Thanks for reading. Enjoy!
PercyandAnnabth4ever

Jane's POV

I didn't know what to think about Lily's quest. It was so scary to think about. She was a witch and she was half god. My best friend had all this time been a demigod, and I never even knew. Wicked!

Her new friends from camp explained everything that had happened.

I-

"If you guys can pull this off, and get into the school.... How will you find Bellatrix?"

"That's the problem." Lloyd complains. "We don't know."

"I'm sure it will be easy. I mean how hard is it to spot a girl in all black with frizzy hair and a crazy look on her face." Jake said,rolling his eyes and crossing his arms.

"Oh, ha ha." Lilly laughs sarcastically. "I mean if it were that easy She Would have been caught by now."

"She could be using Polyjuice Potion!" I snapped my fingers as the idea popped into my head.

Lloyd smiles and cheers," Yeah, polyjuice potion! What's polyjuice potion?" He face goes blank as Lilly explains.

Lloyd was cute. Very cute. In fact, he seemed to like me. I couldn't help but to stare at him sometimes. I mean, I didn't know how I felt about him. I- I didn't-

"So polyjuice potion it is." Jake clapped and rubbed his hands together.

"I have to say that this is the smartest idea you've ever come up with." Alice said with a blank expression.

I feel a chill come over me.

"Do you guys feel that?"

Everyone agrees.

"It better not be a dementor again." Lily murmers.

"I know. Last time was frustrating." I agreed.

The train rattled and came to a stop.

"What do you mean Last time!" Lloyd's eyes were wide.

Neither Lilly or me answered. We searched for any sound or movement.

I grabbed hold to the seat as I heard a growl.

The terrifying growl grew louder.

"It might be us." Lilly said, turning to the demigods.

"All of us in one place... Now I see why only three people are allowed to come."

"Well," Andy sighed. "Hold your breathes.."

The growl grew louder and louder until... Bam!

A huge lady was in the entrance. She had metallic skin and a whip the size of my legs. Her eyes were dark. Her teeth were long and sharp. Her teeth looked like a walrus's.

"It's a kindly one!" Jake screamed pulled out his sword.
I ducked, making my red hair whip into my face.

The hideous creature hissed. "You called master?"

....

Killian smiled. "Of course I did."

"Killian? You summoned a kindly one?" Jake asked.

Killian didn't answer. He turned to the kindly one. "Take me away."

"Wait." Called Alice. "You can't just leave! We rescued you!"