Time passed slowly, and by the end of four weeks he still didn't consciously know where he was going. His clothes were torn and dirty, as was the rest of him. His step was no longer light and quick, his eyes were no longer bright, he never laughed or smiled. He was an empty shell.
FOUR WEEKS???? MY BOY DEPRESSING AROUND THE COUNTRYSIDE FOR FOUR WEEKS BEING THE WHOLE TOO SAD TO EAT AND EVERYTHING AND HE GOT AROUND FOR FOUR WHOLE WEEKS? THAT'S A WHOLE MONTH. HE SURVIVED FOR A WHOLE MONTH
yes yes, i had to give time to get him places, but if i am being consistent with his current state of mind, (which i was) gnome or not, he would not make it was one week.
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Half of the Kingdom(ft. commentary)
FantasíaMy NaNoWriMo novel from November 1st 2016-June 8th 2017 ft. My 2019 self's astute critique. ~~ Miryanna Heolstor is a lady of Terinnia, the niece of the king himself. Ever since she was young she's wanted to follow her father's footsteps and become...
