Day 10

2 0 0
                                    

Okay, okay, we need some actually writing-skill description stuff, so, pretend that scientists make a balloon that can travel through space (omg). What does it see? (Descriptions, not a story about alien life :P)

It was dark.

Good enough description for you? No okay.

The ever pressing darknes surrounded it and then it cleared and it saw wonders. The light was pin pricks turned into images as clear as day, a million suns lighting up a trillion planets, and orange nebulas in swirls and columns and hourglasses. Galaxies of a million colours and dust clouds the same size with black holes dotted about and giant red giants spaced amongst the white dwarfs and normal stars a billion of them in the one galaxy and a billion galaxies. Comets and asteroid belts laced with ice and planets of everything colour. Moons the size of planets and raging temperatures to either vaporise or freeze you, an unnumbered amount of elements to make an a mind blowing about of substances and the silence.

It hung limp in the silence of a thousand dead worlds and probably a few alive ones to and it felt something deep in It's chest.

It felt lonely. For It was so very alone in the vast emptiness of everything.

Okay so my friends said that I didn't update last night so I looked here and found that the above paragraph (the big one) was half finished stopped halfway through a sentence. So I rewrote it. Here's yesterdays challenge for yesterday because something went wrong.

31 Day Challenge 2014Where stories live. Discover now