Kianna-
"Came to find out no one hurt her in that bathroom. Her stomach had to be pumped for taking a lot of pills. I don't know why she was doing that to herself,but I did feel sorry, so when we was at the hospital she finally woke up two hours later. She said a lot of crazy things like how you used to hit her cheat on her and all kinds of things. I told her that she just was talking crazy and that she should go back to sleep, but She just kept going on and on and on ,so I was like you know I'm about to leave cuz I was done hearing all these shit she was saying,so as I approach the door, I opened it and witnessed two white men in all white coats. You know like doctors coats and behind them was a women. I didn't know who the lady was,so I asked alisa who as she was and she said she was her mother. I was totally shocked and confused because I wanted to know what her mother was trying to do. Her mother finally said that she called the two people to take alisa away.I was so surprised and Shocked and asked her mom not to and she kept saying no,so after I kept trying to convince alisa mom to not put her there she finally gave in and agreed not to. When I was standing by the door her mom went next to her bed and put her hand on Alisa's face and I can see she was saying something to Alisa because when she said it Alisa had a painful expression on her face Like she was being hurt by her or sonething,but I didn't pay attention to it because that was there time you know and I didn't want to be rude. Her mother instructed me to leave and I left, but when I was about to exit the hospital I heard a lot of yelling and doctors going into her room and when they all went into the room this strange man went in there also. He was different from the rest of the doctors and nurses and I'm guessing that was her dad. I didn't turn back because I figured all the doctors had everything and I just couldn't go back to Alisa helpless body on that bed."
"wow. I can't believe did things that you have told me. I feel so sorry for Alisa because her mom never liked her you know. They use to have fights all the time. now that I think about it, I'm scared for her because when you told me you was bout to leave the hospital and you heard a bunch of screaming and all the doctors going into the room I think her mom tried to kill her. You need to go back to the hospital and I'm going with you." I said grapping my coat from the livingroom closet."But first I have to go next door and get my daughter,so we can take her.I can't leave her there by herself."
"wait wait wait you have a daughter?" Kianna said confused
"look Kianna i have to explain this to you later we need to get to the hospital right now." She said moving me out the way
Everything is moving entirely to fast for me. I just met Brenda and she has a child. Wow that is crazy. I can't be quick to judge because I almost had a child myself.
As I sat in the Brenda car waiting for Brenda to come back with her daughter we pulled off and got going to the hospital. On a ride to the hospital her daughter kept asking me a lot of questions like "Are you going to be my new mother?" "How old are you." "Where do you live?" this girl was asking too many questions ,so finally after a while brenda told her to be quiet, sit back, and enjoy the ride until we got to the hospital.
when we got there brenda rushed out of the car. I got her daughter out of her booster seat and we ran into the building. I spot brenda at the counter and asking the lady at the desk where Alisa was. The lady at the deck asked for her last name and if she was a family member. Brenda said yes and the lady gave her the room number,so Brenda ran down the hall and turn a corner. Im running behind her with her daughter and I'm out of breath trying to catch up to her because she is running real fast. when she gets there. I could of tell she was taken back from what she saw by the way her faced looked.
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Teen FictionThis is a story about three girls with a whole lot of problems Brenda with her thug life,Kianna with her secret, and Alisa with her relationship with her mom and trying to get over Brenda. will things go right again?