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Read It: If you like amazing intriguing fantasy stories.
PG Rating: Mature content, read at your own risk. Star Ratings: ★★★★
Book Description:
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REVIEW: I like this book but I won't say I liked it from the beginning. Let me elaborate what I mean, the first index was a little too wordy, there wasn't much spacing. You didn't give break like paragraphing to allow the reader pause, it felt endless but apart from that it was good.
Now, to the main review;
TITLE: I love the the title, it's just right. It doesn't expose too much it's also intriguing, it makes you want to know more about the book.
SUMMARY: I loved the summary though it's quite long and wordy it was just right. It was captivating and you gave out the right amount of information about your book without giving way your entire place which a good amount of writers fail at.
COVER: The cover was right but not perfect because nothing's perfect, it can definitely capture your reader. I understand the dark theme you used but then it felt a little overcrowded with words. Anyways your cover is still as right as it can ever be.
PROLOGUE: There was no prologue but the index could cut for that part. So for your index, the first one has already been commented on in the beginning of this review and the second was just right, I found that one way more interesting (I dunno, maybe because of the short attention span I had while reading) but anyway long story short I found the second way more interesting than the first one.
GRAMMAR: So on to this one, your grammar was right I liked that and so were your spellings and punctuations. You stayed on one tense, you didn't slip in and out of different tenses like some other writers.
CHARACTERS: I will give your characters a 4 out of 5, they were very realistic and interesting to read about. They had their own voice and their actions were based off their personalities and how they felt, it's really nice.
CONFLICT: This was properly expressed. Using chapter one as an example, I felt the internal conflict of the main character and the external conflict between what was going on with him made it more interesting to read. I loved the way he reacted to everything even at the point where he ran away instead of facing the predicament right in front of him.
IMAGINATION: I love the use of imagination, it was properly expressed and I liked that.
BACKSTORY: *laugh to myself* is it just me or this book just right? Well the backstory was there and not many writers are able to weave backstories into their story or plot. It didn't come off as preachy or info dumping and it was actually really interesting and I was able to understand why the main character reacted the he did.
TECHNICALITIES: so the pacing was just right, I liked it and yeah tension was evident in some places and it felt right in the places I recognized it.
This book has rid and there was definitely a logical explanation for the way the characters acted because I mean we're all human and humans have different ways of reacting to certain things and your characters were developed to feel real so acted that way.
Expression: You have the right choice of words for the right moments and so far I haven't seen any redundant expression that wasn't important for story or setting.
You had great description that helped me to create a good mental picture of what was taking place or going on.
FINALLY: So far all I can say is this is a really good book and I like it. Oh and I think it has really good potential of becoming entering the wattys
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