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Deathclan used to live in a murky swamp, but they moved to Fireclan's old camp: the Bleeding Mountain (a.k.a volcano).
Poisonclan took Deathclan's old camp and renamed it: The Rivers of Venom, in honour of Venomstar.
Dawnclan live in a bright green meadow, which is lit up by the colours of Dawn, turning it orange, then pink, then lots of other colours.
Soundclan live in a twoleg alleyway, lit up by strange moving colours from the nearby twolegden. They scavenge in this twolegden, sometimes getting caught. They live in the most dangerous territory.
Deathclan:
Leader: Bloodstar - huge red tom with dark green eyes
Deputy: Rageclaw - black tabby tom with ginger paws (dark blue eyes)
Medicine cat: Flamejaw - she-cat with a burnt muzzle and sky-blue eyes
Warriors (she-cats and toms without kits):
Sharpstep - brown she-cat with sharp claws (stone-grey eyes)
Flintfur - grey tabby tom with cloudy blue eyes
(apprentice - dawnpaw)
Lionfang - yellow she-cat with sharp teeth (dark green eyes)
(apprentice - sleekpaw)
Apprentices:
Dawnpaw - dark orange she-cat with a black chest (dark amber eyes)
Sleekpaw - black tom with white swirls and a long muzzle (one eye blue, the other yellow)
Queens (she-cats expecting or nursing kits):
Oak pool - brown tabby she-cat with light brown dapples (dark amber eyes)
(mother to Night kit and Dark kit)
Creamtail - light brown she-cat with a cream tail and brown speckles (soft green eyes)
(mother to Burning kit and Shadow kit)
Dawnclan:
Leader: Brightstar - tortoiseshell she-cat with a white chest and forepaws (light grass-green eyes)
Deputy: Brackenstorm - small, skinny tabby tom with brown fur and dark brown flecks (ice-blue eyes)
Medicine cat: Gingerwing - ginger she-cat with a white belly (bright amber eyes)
Soundclan:
Leader: Dogstar - dark grey tom with a toothy jaw (blood-red eyes)
Deputy: Whitepelt - white tabby she-cat with a black tail (grey eyes)
Medicine cat: Eelfur - black tom with light grey swirls (electric yellow eyes)
Poisonclan:
Leader: Crackstar - light ginger tom with a broken paw (hateful amber eyes)
Deputy: Slyfoot - light grey she-cat with a dark sheen to her pelt (flickering blue eyes)
Medicine cat: Maplefall - light orange she cat with white paws and a very light orange belly (honey-coloured eyes)
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