Not An Ordinary Maxerica Love Story

The Rebels

    So I'm just hanging out in the women's room sketching. Maxon is working with his dad. Queen Amberly is doing well I don't know. Marley and Georgia are doing their job. Aspen is well busy being a guard. The rebel alarm starts to blare. I'm sitting still for a moment in shock. People start yelling and I hear shots fired. It must be the Southerners, the more dangerous group. I start running. I see Marlee and Carter I'm not too far behind them. Two rebels grab me and start running towards the door. I scream so loudly. Marley turns and tries to run after me but a guard grabs her and puts her in a safe room with Carter. I scream and kick, but they are too strong. Uggggh! What am I supposed to do? There is more yelling they drop me and they run. I hit my head pretty hard on the marble. The last thing I remember was looking down and seeing blood all over my shoulder. It wasn't mine; one of the rebels must have had blood all over his hands. Then I pass out a moment after I hit the marble. When the rebels are gone the guards tell everyone that it is safe. Maxon assumes that I was in another safe room. He asks one of the guards if I had gotten out of the safe room yet. "She never made it to one your highness, " the guard replies. "What!" Maxon says. I can hear everything, but I can't move, talk, open my eyes, anything. Maxon sees Marlee crying. Marlee is kneeling over me holding my hand. I wish I could just say something. Carter is talking to one of the guards nearby. Maxon runs over. "America!!" Maxon yells. He rushes over to me. Carter turns around and rushes over. "What happened?" Carter asks. Maxon looks at Marlee. "I-I was running to the safe room when I heard America scream I turned around and saw her being dragged by two rebels and I tried to run after her but guard threw me in a safe room, " Marlee says devastated. They turn me on my back and they see the blood on my shoulder. Marley gasps. Maxon is trying to get me to wake up. Carter is checking my pulse, which he probably can't feel right now because I'm pretty sure it's very weak. "America, please, " Maxon pleads. "Does she have a pulse, " Marlee asks Carter. "If she does it's very weak I can't feel anything, " Carter replies. Maxon sits me up and holds my upper body in his arms like a hug my legs and all still on the floor. "America, please wake up I love you, my dear, " Maxon whispers in my ear it sounds like he is crying. Marlee and Carter have to go back to work so they leave. I flutter my eyes open. Maxon's eyes are closed. I have a pounding headache. I move my arm the one farther away from him and grab his hand. He turns his head to move and opens his eyes. "America?" Maxon says. "Hey, " I say. My voice is so scratchy and quiet I don't know if he even heard. "I thought I lost you, " he says relieved. "Are you okay?" he asks worriedly. "My head hurts a lot, " I reply. " I wouldn't be surprised if you had a concussion, " he says. "Oh and don't call me dear, " I say jokingly. He laughs. He picks me up and brings me to my room. "We will have the best doctor come and check you out okay, " Maxon states. "Maxon really I'm fine, " I tell him. " You know I don't classify hitting the marble, passing out, and waking up with a terrible headache is fine, " he says. "What happened to your shoulder, " Maxon asks. I look down at my shoulder. "Oh that's just some blood from one of the hands of the rebels, " I say to him. He nods. It's nice to be in his arms again. Granted, it would be nicer with other circumstances. I can tell bed still trying to be gentle with my back because of the caning. He keeps moving his arm. My back still does hurt a little, but he doesn't need to be so cautious. "I am sorry America, " he said sadly. "For what, " I ask truly confused. "If I hadn't been working I could've gotten you to a safe room. Or I should've gone to look for you, " Maxon tells me. "Maxon, you truly do always apologize for things you wouldn't have been able to fix, " I tell him trying not to laugh. We get to my room and he carefully lays me on my bed. He starts to walk away and I command jokingly, "Maxon Schreave get back here." He turns around and comes back over. "Where are you running off to?" I question. "I have to go get the doctor, " he says. "Mary?" I say looking at her. She scurries off happy to do something. Maxon lets out a laugh. I stare at him. "I have to go deal with this rebel attack, " Maxon says dreading every word. "What if when I'm done we go out in the garden? " he asks. I nod and smile. My head still hurts so I'm trying to avoid moving it, so I grab his hands towards me. I stare into his eyes. He kisses me goodbye. The doctor comes and he examines my head and all. I just have a concussion. It won't take long to heal with the medicine he gave me. Mary and Georgia clean me up since my hair is a mess I have blood on my shoulder.

I promise the chapters get better. This one wasn't my favorite comment if you like the story orif you have any ideas. Please keep reading it will get better. Also, check out my other story. It's called America and Aspen? it is much better than it sounds. What if the rebels never attacked and Maxon was engaged to Kriss. America to Aspen. America is the first female to get taken by the draft. She is one of the best so she is placed at the palace. Will Maxon end it with Kriss. Will America take him back. Will she survive being a guard. Note: All characters are alive that died in The One. This was my first story on here is I promise I will get better. My other story is much better but please read this as well.