Axelle | L'anima Poesia

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by thebridgesociety

by thebridgesociety

Author: TrinityStellaParker

Reviewer: ItsmeAxelle_

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First of all, you're a great poet and i wish you all the love and luck for your book❤

First impressions :

Cover and title :

The title is beautiful! It is really elegant and has a very soft touch to it.

Now I know I liked one cover from your options, but I feel you can look for more, I mean the cover is beautiful, the font can be bettered, the credits and all can be better, what I mean to say is, Covers can always be fluctuating, one day people may like it, other days it may look kinda unfinished, you can definitely improve it!

Blurb : It's a fantastic blurb, I was so excited to read it, I really liked the blurb💓

The Book Itself :

I love the small trivia things in the beginning of every chapter, amazing❤

All the banner titles, the graphics are really eye catching💓💓
I love the entire set structure of your book, with the trivias in the starting and ending of every poem, the banners, the divisions, all are reallyy awesomeeee💫💫

Your Poems :

Fan.

You are really so good at crafting your poems into art❤
I really like your ryhming schemes, your choice of words, the way you have made them meet so well, I really like them💎

All the chapters I read, I found them to be very consistent which is really good, I like how pleasant your poems are to read!

Although I would to mention here, and please do not take any offence, just a thought from a critics point of view,

I feel your words impress enough, but don't stress enough. Like I feel your poems are really good to read, but somewhere the emotion is lacking, now of course being a poet myself I'll tell you its really hard to do so!
But seeing your potential, I am sure that you can mould your poems better to make the Emotion Shine through❤

But ofcourse, this will only come with time and more reading!

I can suggest some books, whose poems are heavy af on emotions (no I am not promoting my friends, just thought of suggesting, depends on you if you want to take inspiration😄)

Revolution by nightravenxx

Scratches and Blemishes by the same👆

Eutony by _poets_
(This is a poem mentions book, you can find lots of people here who have poetry books and lots of types of poems too!😋)

With this I end my review, I hope you found what you were looking for!

If you want me to point on anything else, please let me know!

Thank you for the great time I had❤❤

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Signing off,
Axelle.