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-last thing said-

"I'll adopt Louis."

-current time-

(A/N: I thought id tell you guys this um, it's a lot of dialect more than like.. Actions and thoughts in this chapter. It goes Jay, Niall, Jay, Niall, Jay, and so on. Hope you enjoy it!)

"No."

"No?"

"No, your not adopting my son. I'm sorry."

"Why not?"

"Because I don't know if I can trust you with him. He's a 10 year old, moving in with his bestfriend. Does that not sound weird to you?"

"Honestly, no. He thinks he's just moving in with his bestfriend. That's all a kid can dream about at his age. Please? He'd be safe with me. I promise."

"I don't know Niall. What if Harry's not okay with it?"

"Do you honestly think Harry wouldn't be okay with it? The smile they lit up on his face just seeing Louis lets me know he'd be okay with it. Just give em' a chance. If it doesn't work out, I myself, will take him to an adoption center myself."

"Fine Niall. I'll be watching you."

"Huh?"

"From heaven."

"Oh. I'm really sorry about that by the way. How are you going to tell Louis?"

"Not sure. Kinda hoping you would sense your kinda his father now."

"Haha, of course. But your going to have to be there with me. Although I think he'd rather hear it from you, I'll do the right thing and tell him for you."

"Thanks. And yeah, of course I'd be in the room with you."

"Okay Ms. Tomlinson. Hey, wanna go now?"

"Yeah. Let's go."

As we enter Harry's room, Louis and Harry are laughing while Bradlee tells them the story about how me and him met. Which is actually quite funny.

(A/N: if you wanna know how they met inbox me. Unless you guys want me to post it as a chapter?? Let me know.)

"Sorry to interrupt this story, but Louis can we talk to you alone?"

"Um.. Yeah. Can Harry come?"

"Do you know what alone means?"

"No."

"Just.. Come by yourself."

"Okay. Harry I'll be right back."

We exit Harry's room and go outside to the wonderful summer breeze. "what's going on?" Louis asks. I look at Jay. "Well Louis.. Good news or bad news first?"I ask Louis, turning my attention back to him. "Hmm..." Louis says. After about 5 minutes of silence which I think had to do with Louis thinking of which one to choose, does he finally say: "Good."

"Your Harry's brother."

"That's.. Wait what? Like for real?"

"Yeah. Which means I'm your dad."

"Oh. Why?"

"And here's the bad news." Jay mutters.

"Well... Your mother is dying tonight."

"How do you know?"

"She has cancer."

"I knew that."

"What?" Jay asks Louis.

"Yeah, I found out. Your not very good at hiding your doctor notes."

"wow." Jay says.

"um, anyways. How do you feel Louis? Everything sinking in?"

"Well, I'll be fine eventually. But it hurts. I love you mommy."

"I love you too Louboo." Jays says, hugging her son. This is probably the most cutest/saddest thing ever.

"I'll leave you guys alone."

"Thank you Niall." Jay mouths to me. I smile and go into Harry's hospital room. "Hey Haz?" I ask him. "Yeah daddy?" He answers. He sets his iPhone down on his lap, looking up at me. Bradlee looks at me as well. "Um.. Louis is your brother now." I say.

"Daddy, can I ask you something?"

"of course." I answer.

"Is it bad to be dating your brother?"

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Hiiiii.

I kinda, sorta, actually, not really like this chapter. But hey! Its not what I want. It's what you want. Pleaseeeeee comment babes. I love you guys berry much. 🍓

See what I did there?

With the berry..

And the 'I love you berry much'...

Because it's a strawberry..

And I'm saying 'I love you berry much'...

Nevermind...

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