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(20) happy 20th chapter anniversary!

:Zayn's POV:

As Niall leaves Harry and I both sit down on the couch with bowls full of spaghetti and watch the telly.

"What do you usually watch Harry?"

He shrugs his shoulders.

"Whatever daddy watches."

"And what's that?"

"My daddy's lame. He watches the news."

"He's not lame."

"Yes he is."

"Anyways.."

"Did daddy tell you that I have a new brother?"

"By who?"

"Huh?"

"Sorry. You don't know what that means. Um.. Who's the mother?"

"Misses Jay."

"Jay? Who's Jay?"

"No. It's misses Jay."

"Sorry. What's your brothers name?"

"Louis."

"That's a nice name."

"Daddy?"

"What?"

"Can I call you daddy?"

"Um.. Sure."

"Daddy.. I want you."

"Excuse me?"

"I want you around me."

"Hold on.. What?"

"Please?"

{daddy kink coming up.}

Okay so I'm suppose to say no. Right? But his face.. Fuck, his face.

"I.. Okay."

"Yay. Come here daddy."

I get up and walk over to him. I stand In front of him as he pulls my jeans down. I wince at the amount of cold air that hits my dick. "Daddy.. Can I touch you?" He asks. I nod my head, not trusting my voice. He pulls my boxers down and wraps his warm fingers around my dick. "Does that feel good daddy?" He asks.

Before I can answer he strokes it softly. "Fuck, yes." I say. He smiles but continues. I moan slightly as he goes faster. "I'm sorry. Did I hurt you daddy?" He asks. I shake my head no. "Keep going. Please." I beg. He continues going the pace he was before. "Are you close?" He asks. I nod my head. "Just keep going." I say.

As I'm about to reach my high, Niall comes stumbling in.

"What the hell is going on in here?"

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HAPPY 20TH CHAPTER ANNIVERSARY!!!

Good or bad sex scene?

I'm not sure if it was or not. It's weird writing a sex scene in your notes and then not knowing anyone who can proof read it to make sure it's okay.

Anyways..
Why was Niall drunk?
Why did he choose Zayn's house to go to?
Why did Zayn allow Harry to give him a handjob?
Why am I only writing sex scenes that have to do with handjobs?
Why is story even popular?
Why are people even reading this?

Sooo many questions!!

Let's see if you can answer them.

Byeeeee. Please comment!!

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