Name: Queen Alura
Nice name!
Age: 6
Nice and young! She'll be queen for a while yet.
Gender: female
nice.
Sexuality: straight
kewl
Tribes: IceWing SeaWing RainWing SkyWing
I've never seen one of those before! So original!
Appearance: always changing, but always very very pretty colour combos
She sounds really pretty!
Accessories: she is obsessed with rings and has a lot
I've never seen a dragon like this before! That's a pretty cool idea!
Abilities: frostbreath, fire, venom, underwater breathing, can light up all scales, firescales, icescales, powerful tail, huge wings, camouflage, animus. I know she's useless.
I was just about to say she could use more abilities, like mind reading or something, just to be slightly more original and spice things up. Not that there's anything wrong with these abilities ;)
Personality: everything good and nothing bad
Good to hear! Flaws make an OC bad and unrealistic, since no one would like them and they wouldn't have any friens.
Backstory: Dawn the SkyWing RainWing had an affair with Typhoon and she was afraid her husband Dusk would be mad so she hid Alura near Possibility and Alura came back to the rainforest. Dawn's brother Jay found her and killed Dawn because he thought Dusk would be mad and he tried to kill Alura but she killed him and then Dusk didn't even care about the affair. She challenged the queens with her pure awesomeness and now rules over Pyrrhia. And Pantala too because why not.
I like the sound of Dawn and Dusk XD. I like how you made sure that she was strong enough to kill her uncle, who is probably a lot older than her, even though she's only six. It shows that she's strong and the perfect choice for Queen, since she can both protect her subjects and help them with everyday problems.
Family: Dawn and Typhoon are her parents
Nice!
Friends: everyone. Even Uncle Jay.
But I thought he was dead...
Other: She's an assassin.
That's pretty cool! I've never found a dragon that's the Queen AND an assassin! Super original!
Overall, I give this OC an 8/10. Like I said before, you could give her a few more abilities, even secret ones, since they help to spice up the character and make sure that she's unbeatable in battle. Other than that, this OC is super original and really fun! I also really like how her father is a canon character, because that means that you could possibly write about her, or even make an AU with her! I feel like she and Darkstalker would've made great friens if they knew each other ;)
Thank you @SewerSavage163 for submitting her!
- Lightfeather
