Tex of the SkyWings and IceWings (@-suicidal_melon-)

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Name: Tex

Ooooooooooooh interesting!

Age: 8

A little old if I'm being honest...

Gender: Non-binary

Great! So original!

Sexuality: Gynsexual

I love it! I wonder if they have a girlfriend yet!

Tribes: Sky/Ice

Eh, it could honestly use a lot more, just to make their design a little more exciting.

Appearance: primarily white with dark red spikes and wing membranes. There's a part of their back where the white blends with the red. They have large powerful wings like a SkyWing's. Curved horns that are red and resemble a SkyWing.

I like it, but it's a little... boring I guess? Maybe switch it up and add in some colours that wouldn't normally be on a SkyWing or an IceWing?

Personality: funny and sweet but can slit your throat if you do anything she doesn't approve of.

Sounds great!

Backstory: she was uh- a mistake? She grew up in Possibility since she's used to heat. Their father was a SkyWing guard who died as they were born. Their mother just disappeared so Tex lived with their best friend, Polar.

Oh nice! Some death and neglection! Great!

Other: they moved to the rainforest when they got a bit older and now lives with their girlfriend, Boa :> who will also slit your throat if she needs to. Tex has frostbreath that literally burns your scales like fire but does the same damage as frostbreath and looks like frostbreath.

Awwwwwwwwww I love it so much :D! Nice job on the abilities, but maybe add a little more? Like maybe firescales or icescales, or some really sharp claws?

Oh and

Accessories: a flower crown made of red roses. And a bracelet that has several different charms hanging from it.

So pretty!


Overall, I give this OC a 6/10. They're well thought out, but I think it would be better if they had some traits from other tribes, and if everyone in the world was their friend. Also, their appearance is a little boring and realistic, therefore unoriginal, and they only have a few abilities. If you fox this OC up, I'm sure they'd make the perfect character!

Thank you to @-suicidal_melon- for submitting them!

- Lightfeather

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