Pilot part 4

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Third person narration

The five teenagers end up outside the hotel of the man who owned the sunken boat. 

jj whistles "and i thought the Chateau looked bad"

This place is shit show john b said

motel or  meth lab kie states

im suprised the police aren't here investigating that lynn states

Doesn't look like the type of place someone with a grady white would stay john b said

yea it looks like the place where someone with a grady white would get killed said pope

hey pope your corner side is showing but not that i mind said lynn laughing

John b and jj hop out of the boat 

Hey lynn are you coming? asked jj

no shit Sherlock she said getting up

Jj held out a hand for her and she took it saying why thank you kind sir in a horrible British accent

My pleasure madam jj said returning the accent

"JB." Pope calls, the long haired boy turning around to face him. "Don't let those two do anything stupid."

Not making any promises JB called out.

jj and lynn then turn their attention to kie telling John B to be careful both of them already thinking the same thing turn to each other and make kissy faces.

Once they are out of hearing range from kie Jj starts mocking kie and says be so careful John B. Like what the hell was that all about.

I dont know maybe she wants us to be careful right lynn john b says

I mean i dont think so JB she didnt tell me and jj anything she just told you. 

Think about it guys ever since John B was being threatened with exlie she just been like oh be so careful john B just give me that john D already. Like when are you gonna swoop on that.

That was clever jj lynn laughs as she starts to walk ahead

Bro,you already know the rule no pouge on-

yea yea no pouge no pouge mack i know jj say looking at lynn longingly 

besides your the one whos always flirting with her

once lynn is out of ear shot jj says no im always flirt with Lynn and why wouldn't i shes a hot photographer and a badass surfer chick with tattoos slumming it with us and i dont know why. 

Lynn says this is it interrupting their conversation.

Jj knocks on the door and says Housekeeping in a high pitch voice that sends lynn into a fit of laughter.

Lynn then unlocks the door with the key since there was no response.

Once the door unlocks they see the room has 2 beds that are already made and a duffel bag on one of the beds  

lynn and jj walk over to the nightstand that has a map ona nd try to figure out what the x on the map meant as John b looks through the bad saying that hes over 50 because he has new balances. john b walks over to another sand and opens it to find a safe lynn then sees a piece of paper with numbers on it she walks over to john b as jj walks over to the bathroom and talks about a dopp kit.

John b punches in the numbers and the safe unlock for them to see wads of cash and two guns along with an envelope.

John b calls over jj as lynn and jj peer into the safe they both simultaneously reach their hands out for the guns and a wad of cash.

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