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third person POV

(john grabs pizza from the fridge)
Joyce: I made eggs. so I'm gonna pick you up after practice at five.
John:six. I wanna shoot around.
Joyce: is that chad kid still giving you trouble?
John: no
Joyce: okay
John: (whispering) hey Sammy come on
(feeds the dog the eggs)
Joyce: so I was thinking, how abt I call ur coach?
John: no! hell no!
Joyce: language
(Joyce sees the dog eating the eggs off the floor)
Brian: good morning
(Joyce gives Brian the plate with eggs)
Brian: thank you
Joyce: your welcome
Brian: (to John) good morning
John: hey dad
Brian: so the warriors are playing the Thunder tomorrow in Oklahoma City. What do you think is gonna happen?
John: well steph curry just scored thirty-two points last night. So what I think is that, chef curry is gonna whomp on em
Brian: I don't know. Durants pretty good. He is reigning mvp
Joyce: John. (Gives him a plate with more eggs on it)
Is someone gonna bless our food? Okay. Well, I guess I will.
Lord, though he exasperates me to no end, I am greatful for my son. For I know that you created him for a purpose, thus far only known to you.
bless this food to our bodies. Amen.
Brian and John: amen.

(In the car)
(John listening to music through his headphones)
Joyce: I was thinking abt raising your allowance to 100 bucks a week.
(John couldn't hear her through his music which he was jamming to so Joyce joined in)
John: what are you doing?
Joyce: your mom is just trying to get her sons attention.
chayla: hey John
John: wassup guys?
Joyce: hug
(John hugs his mother)
John: please go.
(Joyce rolls down the window)
Emma: hey mrs. J
Joyce: hey chayla. hey Jenny. Hey Emma. How are you girls?
Jenny: living the dream, mrs. J.
Joyce: oh, I tried to friend you on the Instagram, but I must be doing something wrong.
John: oh my god! please, just go, ma.
Joyce: I'm kidding! Have a good day! Bye!
John: hey Abby
Abby: hey

authors note (cuz apparently that's what ppl do)
So I really wanted to read a story like this but I couldn't find one so I'm making one even tho no one will probably read this.. well if your reading this hope u enjoy:)

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