Givemefeedback Stories

I knew it was wrong to fall in love with his sister. Maybe he would understand..

A short poem about love finding you

Far away, in a world where only the chosen ones get the power of the stars. Esiora. Where the sea is full of mysteries and adventures. There on the planet Esiora at a sm...

Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!

Jackson Boudelaire is overworked. His Mother and Father died in a car accident a few years prior, leaving him to take care of their debt to some shady organization and h...

just me posting some of my poems, any (constructive) feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!! I own all content in this book as it is all my original work, including th...

This is my first story and I can't draw to save my life. This is about my OC's experiences at UA in Japan !

Deceit has been going through so much pain, he just wants to end it but he can't die. He was all for cutting until the others found out... (art not mine apart from the c...

Jane just wants to be a normal kid... but after what happened last summer, its hard to be normal. She has to face the bullys, her mom's fiance, and the jerk friends.. Wh...

Ms. Ellen is the most mysterious teacher in the school. Seven middle school student were heading up to their first period with her. The bell rang yet there was no sign...

Starting highschool can be either very great or hourendous. This is a story in which you follow four soon to be friend, all with different likes and personalitys, as the...

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is deter...

A girl Lilly who's just your average high school student, what happens when she sees something she shouldn't have and ends up being forced into a gang with vampires.

Poetry on how daily life goes. The words I couldn't explain.

Give me feed back please. What happens though the eyes of each child and mother. A mother may not see everything unlike a child.

These are my screw it notes. When something goes down in my life I write about it. So this one is for my ex guy best friend.

wip of a random story that's probably moving way too fast

Courtney moves back to her birthplace, England

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