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A short 3 some sex story Must read

Deceit has been going through so much pain, he just wants to end it but he can't die. He was all for cutting until the others found out... (art not mine apart from the c...

A short poem about love finding you

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is deter...

Just gonna have to fins out yourself!!!

We are writing a personal narrative for ELA .This is not a real story I'm just saying it is because I need a good grade lol. Pls give me feedback so I can get a kinda g...

The feelings i am feeling is in my poems, feel free to read and tell me what you think of them. They are the honest truth and i cant wait for you to read so i can tell y...

Give me feed back please. What happens though the eyes of each child and mother. A mother may not see everything unlike a child.

A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.

Anybody loves to travel, But for jaycee it was way too much until she meets the person who changes her life forever.

just me posting some of my poems, any (constructive) feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!! I own all content in this book as it is all my original work, including th...

Join DJ in his journey to discover what he is throughout the omniverse with his friends by his side by using the disc's

This story is about a teenager who stays to herself and looks at life with a different point of view.... Well in her mind at least! She's a young women trying to find he...

Melissa Morello has been in the Illinois State Psychiatric Hospital for almost two years. She was diagnosed with PTSD, Paranoid Schizophrenia, and other mental health is...

Lucy heartfilia is a celestial mage,Natsu dragneel is a dragon slayer. They were the best of friends,but what happens when one person breaks them apart and turns them in...

This story is basically one shots of a story that I've been working on. First chapter is the basic world-building, description for the story, characters, and all that ja...

This is my first story and I can't draw to save my life. This is about my OC's experiences at UA in Japan !

Angel, Ariana,and Asia are just three normal girls. They just finished their middle school years and summer break is almost over. High school is just one week away. The...