Primed: A Kayla Madison Story

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Reads 933
Votes 82
Parts 37
Time 7h 57m

Kayla Madison is a normal-ish sixteen-year old whose main desire is simple-make it through high
    school without embarrassing herself too much in the process. It doesn't help that she's being followed by dark figures no one else sees.
    
    When a man with incredible speed, unbelievable power, strange old-fashion clothes, and an obnoxious personality threatens her life, she discovers she is a rare "two-worlder" -a person with one parent from Earth and the other from Earth Prime. She escapes another attack by jumping through a portal to the alternate dimension, much to the chagrin of her protector.
    
    As if managing without electricity, cars, and phones on the more Edwardian world weren't enough stress; she finally meets her long-absent father, a scientist in the top-secret field of Trans-Dimensional Travel. Things get more complicated when she realizes her best friend's father, or rather the Earth Prime version of him, might have been the person that orchestrated the assaults.
    
    
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    Thanks for reading! I've been working on this story for quite a while and have drafts for a five book series.  I would love feedback on what I can do to make it a stronger story.  If there are things you enjoy, let me know (so I don't change those parts.)  :)
    
    
    All portions of the story have been submitted and final chapters will visible by Nov 18, 2023.
    
    Among other degrees, I have my MFA in creative writing.  I am a science teacher when I am not writing.All Rights Reserved

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Kayla Madison is a normal-ish sixteen-year old whose main desire is simple-make it through high
school without embarrassing herself too much in the process. It doesn't help that she's being followed by dark figures no one else sees.

When a man with incredible speed, unbelievable power, strange old-fashion clothes, and an obnoxious personality threatens her life, she discovers she is a rare "two-worlder" -a person with one parent from Earth and the other from Earth Prime. She escapes another attack by jumping through a portal to the alternate dimension, much to the chagrin of her protector.

As if managing without electricity, cars, and phones on the more Edwardian world weren't enough stress; she finally meets her long-absent father, a scientist in the top-secret field of Trans-Dimensional Travel. Things get more complicated when she realizes her best friend's father, or rather the Earth Prime version of him, might have been the person that orchestrated the assaults.

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Thanks for reading! I've been working on this story for quite a while and have drafts for a five book series. I would love feedback on what I can do to make it a stronger story. If there are things you enjoy, let me know (so I don't change those parts.) :)

All portions of the story have been submitted and final chapters will visible by Nov 18, 2023.

Among other degrees, I have my MFA in creative writing. I am a science teacher when I am not writing.

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