The biggest curse coming to an end

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"The destructions of mahabharat are extremely immense. The bloodshed , the unfair deaths - everything! This is not a righteous war ." A man said to his wife.
The wife nodded as she viewed the battlefield. Everyone except the pandavas were dead. Did the pandavas deserve to live? They were at fault too. They had betted on their wife. How were they any different from Duryodhan? Yes they repented but did they really deserve to be the heroes of this massive epic?
"You are right priye. There have been many unfair killings. All deaths were against the rules of warfare. Mahamahim Bheesm was distracted by Shikhandini who was clearly a woman. If women were allowed to fight the they should have informed the kauravas. They had strong warrior women too. Moreover Dronacharya was killed when he was weapon less.  And Karn! His death was the most painful to watch. Krishna has tricked him several times . First of all his mother took away everything from him when she demanded the promise of keeping her sons safe. He was her son too but she never cared about him. Secondly Indra's cruelty. Taking away his gifted armour. Why then was Parth allowed to use his Gandhiv? It was a divya weapon too. Thirdly he was killed when he was weapon less and helpless. He is the most tragic character in this story." The man sighed sadly.
"I agree dev. They did deserve death but then so did the pandavas. The pandavas didn't do anything to deserve a happy ending." The wife said.
"And that is why I have to change it sister." A melodious voice was heard.

Narayan made his way upto the couple

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Narayan made his way upto the couple.
They were in Kailash and the couple was the ultimate couple of all time, the oldest lovers, the Adi human.
Shiv and Parvati!

"I am not really happy with the ending of this story bhratasree

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"I am not really happy with the ending of this story bhratasree." Parvati said a little annoyed.
Mahadev however noticed the smile in Narayan's face and understood that Narayan was upto something. There was a plan it seemed.
"Neither am I dear sister. And all of it began with the biggest curse.The entire Mahabharat was a result of the biggest curse ever. I couldn't control the tale this time Parvati and the only reason was because Krishna was incomplete. What is Narayan without his Laxmi? Similarly what is Krishna without his Radha? But Radha and I were cursed to never be United. You all remember the story right?" Narayan asked with a sad look on his face.
"Yes King Janak's curse." Parvati said recalling the incident.
Everyone started crying as they saw the pure Sita going inside the earth. She didnt deserve this . She was a pure woman by heart. Ravan had never touched her and she had proved it by giving the agni pariksha. But when her husband demanded a second Agnipariksha she burst out. She couldn't do this anymore. Her life was filled with misery and the only support was Rama but when Rama himself requested her to give the Agnipariksha she couldn't take it anylonger. She burst into tears.
"I cant do this. I am tired of proving my purity. I dont deserve to be in a place where women have to prove their purity continuously to dwell in the society. I don't need this society. I dont need to prove myself. There was not a single night in Lanka which was darker than this night. Today you all have crushed me. Hey Rama I have fulfilled my responsibility  towards our sons. I have been an ideal wife. I have been an ideal mother. I have been an ideal daughter. I am done being the victim every time.  Hey mother earth! You had promised me you will hide me in your bosom whenever I will request you. Please Mata. Take me along with you!" Sita shouted breaking down to tears.

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