Naruto Neglected - The Unbearable Pain (Discontinued)

CHUNNIN EXMAS: CHALLENGING UNCHALLENGED

I scucks at making other people reaction towards match while all the fighting it's not that satisfactory.

What's you options on who will win.

I tried writing feeling type of scene but how does it goes tell.

This whole chapter was written in hype there must be grammar mistakes and auto type correct me when see any by comments on line.

(Scene change - Examination Stadium: Stands)

In the 'Kage's Box' silence reigned supreme, the group of people inside looking at the scene of Naruto clutching the mangled remains of his left arm couldn't voice their thoughts.

A joinnin appears near Minato and whisper in his ear "Lord hogake if match goes on that sand sprit can even kill civilian" with that said Minato nodded.

"Wait! Hokage-dono, don't stop the match!" He said, getting looks of utter confusion.

"My village people can be in danger any movement, I can't risk that" questioned Minato.

"Please hear me out Hokage-doni, believe that Naruto-dono is quite the skilled shinobi. An injury like that will most likely occur in the field sooner or later in his career as a ninja, this battle with simulate such an event. Calling the match now would only show that you are still treating him as a child rather then a shinobi. All participants signed a waiver that stated that death was a possible outcome of the exams, so he knew that he could have died any moment during the exams. Stopping the match now would only serve to revoke that waiver." The Kazekage stated, makingMinato widen their eyes slightly before minato narrowed his eyes.

I'm sorry but I have to agree with Kazekage-dono on this matter. Naruto knew that death was a part of the exams, stopping him now would only make him more irritated with us. Hayate is down there as the proctor, not only that but the other jōnin are close by. Should anything happen, they would jump in and make sure that Naruto isn't killed. Not only them but Jiraiya and Tsunade are right here; they would be more then fast and strong enough to stop Naruto from being killed. And if worst comes to worst, I'm not known as the fastest shinobi alive for nothing." Minato reasoned as jouinin just scoffed and faced the arena one again.

'That brat just die already...yes this is the best opportunity for him to die.' Minato thought, his eyes never leaving his son's injury as he smirk over it in his mind.

"Now things get interesting. Haha!" The Kazekage thought, his eyes shining as he looked with profound interest at the two.

Over on the rooftops of the stadium, Jiraiya and Tsunade stared at Gaara with steely eyes. They knew what he contained and that alone worried them, especially since his seal wasn't as stable as the seals of other jinchuriki. Quickly glancing at each other, they nodded as they reached a silent agreement to step in should anything more dangerous happen.

In the stands, silence reigned as the spectators saw Naruto's arm. Some turned green as they've never seen such an injury in their lives as others winced and clutched their own arms as a chill ran down their spines.

"Naruto-kun, please don't do anything rash. Sometimes surrender is the best choice of action, it's not a weakness to know when to give up."Hinata thought with eyes wide in fear, seeing the boy she adored reduced to such a damaged state.

In another section of the stands Ino, Sakura and Choji looked on with mouths agape as they saw what had just happened. Ino and Sakura were green as they had their eyes snapped shut and their hands over their mouths, never having seen an injury that bad since the battle Gaara had with Lee. Next to them Choji was the same, putting the chip he was about to eat back into the bag where it came from.