Okay so I'm going to do a feed back thingy so please comment and tell me what you think about my book:
Am I going to fast or too slow?
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Do you like the characters I made?
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Do you enjoy how the plot is going so far?
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Do you like my book?
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What would you suggest me to do or add?
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Out of a scale from 1-10 how would you rate this book?
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Do you like how I made the original characters personalities, are they good?
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Is the story way too cliché, or too cheesy and not good in your POV?
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IF Leo and Serenity do get together what do you want their ship name to be?
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Personally I think it would be Valtiz but you might have better ideas then comment, and they might not be together.........IF......
so that's it and be sure to answer PLEASE!!!!
