The Beginning (pilot)

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(this chapter tells how the character dies. So there's nothing special on the first chapter but later down the other chapters are going to be entertaining and you'll find this character to be interesting. Hope you guys enjoy reading the story and please review my story. A little bit of support will help to give more people to read my story!)
"Wake up!"

Boy in bed woke up from his father yelling outside his door. That boy was Zane. Zane is your typical 19-year-old trying to get through life and obviously wants to make his own choices instead of people controlling him. He got off from bed and started dressing up to go to school. it was his last day before graduation and he was excited.

His thoughts "when is David going to know that I set an alarm clock right next to me."

The reason why you call his father David is because he's actually an orphan. Even Zane couldn't believe that even at 19 he still needs to be watched by foster parents. He put on his signature outfit that is black jeans, red and black shoes, black jacket, black shirt with smoke shaping skulls around him.

1 hour later

During his school time, some of his friends were talking about going to a special party night that his school was hosting. He was not going there but his friends pretty much forced them to do it. Because they said that his crush was actually going there and even if he claims that that's not his crush anymore, his friends knew that he was lying.

"Come on man we know that you're going to be there anyway" Joey said

"Yeah" said Mitchell "you can't just puss out on this!"

"All right fine if it's the only way to shut you two up" Zane said "but don't embarrass yourself for going for some girls at the party and try to make yourself look impressive to them."

Near at 5:00 he was getting ready to go to the party. His foster mother was at work and his foster father was probably drinking a lot of alcohol on sleeping on the couch. As he was getting ready he looked out the window and saw something will pass his window very fast. He felt like he was being watched and so he closed the curtains and finish getting dressed. He left a note for his foster father wondering if he where he was at. Which he doubt his father will care anyway

10 minutes later

He made it at the party and already noticed his friends were inside talking to some girls.

"Oh No" he thought. He walked towards his friends Mitchell and Joey. They turn around and saw him walking towards them.

"We were here sooner than you think" Mitchell said

"Yeah I know you could have just text me or call me" Zane said annoyingly

Aside from Mitchell and Joey trying to hit on couple of girls, the party was amazing! The music was loud, the stadium was colorful, even people are dressed up very fancy.

For some reason Zane didn't feel like he was welcome like he was an outsider, he decided to walk outside to get some air, but then again he saw something dash from roof to roof above him like it happened right by his window at his house. He thought he was saying things so he mind his own business again.

An hour and a half later

His friends are literally drunk at this point. They knew he has to drive them home or bring them to his house so they can go to sleep. While he was trying to find them he heard a sound that everybody heard.

GUNSHOTS!

Everybody was screaming rushing for the exit. What Zane saw he wish he never see, dead bodies covered in blood and full of bullet holes. Nobody knows what's happening, but Zane knows he and his friends needs to get the hell out of there before they're next! During the massacre Zayn couldn't find his friends he thought he they probably escaped or that terrible thought that he had "what if they're dead".

Gunshots were still roaring through the area any new that it was getting closer and closer to him so he did something that will know that will give him nightmares he lay near the bodies to pretend that he's dead and hopefully the killers don't know! For 15 minutes the screams stopped and all there is silence.

Zane didn't hear anything. He rose up from the dead bodies looked around he feel like he could vomit. So many dead people about to graduate tomorrow to start a new life now all has been wasted. Zane paralyzed in fear looking everywhere then "BANG"! A gunshot heard from behind feeling a sharp pain near his chest. He turn around and saw the mask killers.

"Looks like we miss one boys!" Said the killer with an angel mask.

Zane doesn't know what to do! More Killers started surrounding him he couldn't do anything. He knew his life was coming to an end!

The killer with an angel mask walk towards him face to face. Zane did not expect what happened next the killer took off his mask revealing his foster father!

"You should have stayed home" he said as he raised his gun towards Zane aiming for his head.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Zane scream. He looked around realizing he was in the alley. He doesn't know how long he's been there but he got up feeling different, he thought that probably he drunk a little and had a nightmare and passed out in an alley. While he was walking towards the street he realized the skies was red.

"That's weird" he said

When he reached the street it was empty probably thinking it was very early in the morning he looked at a store's clock it's it said one in the afternoon

"What the fuck?"

Then he saw fireworks from the sky and then all of a sudden people started coming out of the buildings or was people. He saw horrifying creatures some of them look like half snake people or a shark human, all types of different creatures. He was panicking he was started running towards the middle of the city trying to figure out where he is and then a sign above him bright neon lights that reads "Welcome to Hell".

End of chapter one
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