Sigma/Star

Housecleaning Update

I'm creating this to help older readers who are following all the new updates or are somewhere in the middle of the book around now (pretty much all of you). I've been going back through the work, just cleaning up a ton of typos, just...so many typos..I'm very bad with typos...but have also been correcting some strange continuity issues that I've made with character spellings or funny details. In some instances, I've actually altered things to bring them more inline with changes that occur later, or changed some details to have them make more sense. I'll list them down below and will move this chapter throughout the work as I make large changes to help people keep up. Some will have explanations, some will just make sense.

Porter backstory fixed: Early on in the work, like super early, I mention Porter had lived with his parents for a bit longer than becomes clear later, so that was just a consistency fix.

Goliath size fixed: For some reason when I started writing, I had thirty feet in my mind. It wasn't until much, much later when Goliaths got drawn for comic reasons that I realized the scale wasn't what I imagined. I changed it to fifty feet to make it clear that Goliaths are big, but I don't want them to be enormous.

Sigma size fixed: For some reason, Sigma is listed as 6 feet early on...then 8 feet later. Whoops. He's eight feet tall, let's make that clear.

Allyson spelling change: This is the only spelling fix I'm clarifying cause I messed it up a lot. It's Allyson, not Allison.

Narrius fixed from Naurrius

Artisan Federation fixed from Artisan Confederate (can't explain why I called it that)

Enia Federation fixed to Enian Federation

Fixed the opening where I used the word raven about 9 times to describe everyone's hair...some sort of weird obsession I need to deal with apparently...

Fixed Syn height from 6 feet to 8 feet

Fixed Archangel height from forty feet to sixty feet (scaling with change of general Goliath height)

Fixed Ronald/Donald spelling errors. Name is Ronald.


These changes are going to be implmeneted over time, so if you start re-reading right now to see what it looks like now that it's slightly cleaner, you may find old mistakes still there while I transfer from docs to Wattpad.

See you soon for the next updates!