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Hello all my guys, gals, nonbinary pals and whoever is somehow still reading whatever the hell this is. I would like to thank anyone who either got a notification saying this was updated and actually read it or anyone who actually made it through this story without dying because of the horrible plot and frequent spelling mistakes.

I would like to say that I started writing this story when I was 11 and just getting into the Miraculous Fandom so I fully understand that is story is actual garbage.  As the dumb little child I was, I read all of these pretty bad fan fictions on Wattpad and decided to follow the same format with the quite embarrassing first person p.o.v and emojis. So basically, I fully accept that it sucks and I appreciate anyone who actually read and liked this.

Now that I got that out of the way, Íd like to talk about my new Miraculous story, Not What She Seems. I already have two chapters published on here and on a03. Here is the synopsis:

after joining his father and saving his mother adrien is enjoying life with no consequences. sure, he had to betray his lady and paris's trust to get to that point but he was just happy to have a complete family again. but after recovering some of his mother's past and hearing that marinette has come down with a mysterious illness, adrien starts to realize that perfection comes with a price.

My new story is (in my opinion) much better than this one. Ím writing it in third person p.o.v, getting editing advice from my friend, and developing my own completely original plot. As a bonus, here's a little excerpt from the first chapter:

"You don't love me the way that she did, you can never match her," Adrien had screamed , his eyes filled with hatred.

"No Adrien that's not true, I love you," She had yelled back from the ground, "I've loved you ever since the day we met, you're my everything,"

"You're wrong," Adrien had said as he activated his Cataclysm, "You fell in love with Adrien, and he's not real, he's fake and you can't love something that's not real," Adrien had stared at her with stone-cold eyes as he walked closer to her.

"No, you're real," She had said as she slid back on the floor, bumping into the coffin, "You have to be real,"

"I'm not Marinette, so I might as well destroy those earrings and bring back someone who loved me for who I truly am," Adrien had walked over to her with no mercy in his eyes, his white mask making his icy blues eyes look even scarier, Adrien kneeled down next to Marinette's shaking, helpless body,

"Goodnight m'lady,"

So there you have it, I really hope you decide to check my new story out but no worries if you dońt want to. I'm actually really proud of it and Íd love to share it with people.
Have a great day/ night <3

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