ANIDITA - SAILING WITH YOU !!!

STAY FOREVER (OS)

Actually long ago i have heared that even movies had two or three climaxes and they finalize one from it, Likewise i too had two climax for the last os jaane ki baath na karo hence i wanted to present the other climax for the os which i had in my Mind. 

Let's start..

The story is same from the Jaane ki Baath na karo ... till 

Bondita before him took the roshagulla and poured the Zeher from the Bottle and Ate it but he stood expressionless said " Pata chal gaya Bondita tumhara saare khel mujhee..." But Blood started to ooze from Bondita's Mouth..

" Bonditaaaaa !!" He screamed and ran Towards her and holded her before she fully collapsed down. She smiled little seeing his pain His eyes Tears fell on her alta applied hands and wiped a little.

That Day kaka with som and Bihari were present in Durga Mandir for some Village Meeting. Bihari who happened to saw Bondita in Wedding attire talking with Anirudh rushed and intimated kaka.

Kaka who was schocked when Bihari hushed what is happening behind Mandir suddenly dispersed the Crowd rushed to the place with Som.

Kaka was happy that his bahu is on the Right Path but when he Reach He was astonished to see his beloved Bahu collapsing in Anirudh's Hands.

" Bahu Bahu kya hogaya tumme "

" Boudhiii boudhi"

" Choti Malkin ...."

Even tapur and Tupur ran and came inside hearing the voices..

" Dekhiye na kaka Bondita mujhe daarane kiliye natak karnekiliye Zeher ki dabbe mein Sahahad ( honey ) bhar ke rakhi hai lekin kisine Badal diya... " and cried

" Kya?" Kaka screamed while som said " Dada ab rone ka wath nayi hai Boudhi ko bachana hai "

" Ha som kuch karo " Anirudh pleaded while Bondita said " Nayi sakha Babu main bach nayi paungi "

" Chup ek dum chup Tumme kya shaanti se mar jaoge lekin mera kya socha tumne Tum mujhe phirse zinda laash bannana chahthi ho "

she nodded her head left and right indicating No...

" Phir chup som jo keharahe karo please Bondita " and cried she wiped his tears strugglingly said " Tk sakha Babu aap math royiye mai khosish karungi "

Som had already ordered Bihari to Bring Drinking water and he too brought it.

" Dada suniye jitna hosake utna paani pilayiye tab bhi zeher ki takath kam hogi  aur main jaake saabun ka paani kahi milega lekar aatha hoon, Tapur chalo mere saath " he went with her while kaka was tapping her forehead and Anirudh was trying to feed her water.

" Pee nayi paarahi hoon mein !" she said in Broken voice..

" Khosish karo Bahu som ne kaha na paani zeher ka takath kam karega peelo beta "

Within that Som and Tapur convinced some villager and Borrowed cloth washing Detergent mixed in Two buckets of water taken to the Backyard of durga mandir. Kept near the Banyan tree said tapur to bring them out.

Bondita was already going in an unconscious state, Tapur said " Bondita didi ki sakha babu wo doctor sahab didi ko bahaar le kar aane kiliye keharahe hain "

Anirudh lifted her while bihari took water containing vessel and followed. Others too went with them. Som as soon they came said " Dada boudhi ko yaha litadijiye aapki kapde gandhe hojayenge isse pilane se ulti ayegi "

" Koi nayi som koi baath nayi meri godh mein rehne do mujhe Bondita se jaadha kuch zaroori nahi hai"

Bondita was laid in his lap and som started to give her soap water little by little but she spitted it immediately.

" Boudhi samjhiye paani se bus zeher ka takath kam hua hai usse nikalne kiliye ye saboon ka paani peena padega, peelijiye please"

Bondita started drinking little by little,  after Few minutes she started to puke in side. Som smiled at the success made her drink more and more. She was maded to drink plenty of soap water, she puked in between intervals therby reducing the Effort of Poison.

Bondita became tired tried to close her eyes while Anirudh " Bondita ankhe khol"

" Dada tag gaye honge lag bag zeher bahaar aachuka hai phir bhi doctor ke pass le chalenge unhe " Anirudh tried to lift her but she herself holded his hands and stood.

" Bahu tum tk haina ! " she nooded weakly. Tupur went away feeling guilty but none noticed it.

" Sakha Babu doctor ke pass jayenge lekin ek sharth pe "

" Bonditaaaa "

" Please "

" Kaho kya kehna hai "

" Barrister Babu Bondita Ro.. nahi Barrister Babu Bondita Bulayiye "

Anirudh looked at her intently holded her wrists said " Mere saath chalo " and took her to the Front of Durga mandir which was almost vaccant by Now.

Bondita and others looked surprised what he was Doing ?

Anirudh looked at Bondita said " Mujhse shaadi karoge Bondita " she too nodded happily and he went and took sindoor from the arti plate smeared on her forehead while she cried inconsolably. Kaka too cried Happily at last his Laxmi is Back. She finally became his ! 

" Ab kehatha hoon Barrister Babu Bondita Roy Chowdhary Ab chalenge Hospital " to which she nodded happily and went with him. They reached the hospital and doctor said already Eighty percent poison was removed only some twenty percent is left that can be treated easily.

Anirudh hugged som and thanked him, som said " Dada boudhi hai mere uppar se ek doctor ka kartavya hai marez ka ilaj karna " Thay all heaved a long breath.

After hours Bondita was Back to concious again and was completely out of Danger. Takuma and chandrachoor came there and tried to Barge in but Anirudh stopped them saying " Koi Andar nayi jaayenge "

" Barrister Babu tumhare wajeshe mere poti Hospital mein hai hato humme dekhne do "

" Wo ab Bondita Das nahi Bondita Roy chowdhary isliye ab usse nayi dekh sakthe tumlogon ki wajeshe Bondita ki ye halaath hai "

" Kya kuch bhi tumne toh shaadi kab ki tod chuke ho na " Takuma yelled..

" Ab phirse uski marsi se maine shaadi karli chali jayiye "

" Anirudh ek min Beta dekhne do ek Baar lekin uske Baath dekhne nayi denge " Kaka screamed.

Takuma and Chandrachoor went inside and saw semi concious Bondita lying with Bright Red sindoor on her Forehead. They just came out silently went without saying Anything!

Tapur who have hided when Takuma came rushed and intimated what all happened to sumati Ma. Sumati and Tapur came secretly in night time to Meet Bondita, Sumati Ma blessed her said " Tum khush raho meri Bachchi humara chinta math karo ! " and pecked her Forehead.

After a Day doctor discharged her, Bondita Went with Anirudh to RC haveli as his wife. Sampoorna Happily took the Arti of the Couple while shaswati came running said " Bondita mausi " But kaka said " Shashwati Beta Ab Tumhara Bondita Boudhi Hai Tumhare Anirudh Dada ki patni " To which both Anirudh and Bondita Blushed.

Bondita kicked the Rice pot enetered the haveli bringing all the prosperity once again Back.

She walked in alta paani and went inside holding his hands, this time for Forever....

Hey personally I felt Giving tragic end was not justifiable hence wrote this, Astory with two climax like the shirt which can be worn Two sides.

Say me how it came out ! Thanks for reading 

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