Writing ielts

Lesson 12

The rising number of overweight children in many developing countries is a big issue that is always up for discussion. This is a hot topic these days. Some individuals believe that the problem is caused by the increase in the number of fast food restaurants, while others believe that parents are to blame for their children's poor health.I believe that eating habits have entirely changed and that they must be corrected immediately.

One of the most notable causes of this problem is the significant shift in our lifestyle as a result of practicular technological improvement and shophistication, which has a significant impact on our everyday lives and health. These achievements are followed with a negative influence on our health as a result of a loss of physical activity and laziness at the workplace and at home. Most people who suffer from this ailment spend a lot of time at work sitting in front of a computer without doing anything physical. Not only that, but most of us spend time at home watching TV and resting in our bedrooms. Even children nowadays prefer to play computer games or talk with their friends on the internet rather than participate in outdoor sports.In addition to the fact that fast food restaurant systems are also very developed and popular, children all like to eat greasy fast food and do not practice sports but sit at home and play on their phones and computers increased risk of obesity.

In my opinion, teachers, parents, and the government as a whole should treat this as a top priority and take the appropriate steps to address it at all levels. For instance, parents are required to monitor their children's eating habits and ensure that they eat healthy foods while limiting the amount of enticing junk food.

Finally, in short consumption of fast foods should be reduced gradually simultaneously parents ought to pay more concentration on children habits and also force them to do exercises which keep body it.