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Reading this just now, after what...5 years? Made me really want to fix it. There's so much potential here!!

First off, oh my god the ableism in this xD
Or more specifically, Echopaw's constant need to remind people, including the reader, that she is blind. And also....my god, she is such a mary sue. She has like zero personality and reaction to things xD

Also, I kind of like the idea of more of her siblings having perspectives maybe? Hmm and also, in the third perspective. I've been liking that POV more lately.

I don't remember most of my old ideas for this story, as it was my first Warriors fanfic(and fanfic in general). But again, I can see the potential.

I also made a cover for it, but sadly lost it TwT
So that's some art I can never have back.

But who knows, maybe more people will like it, hehe. So I should try!

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