quick notes (chapter 5 onwards)

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So as i was writing this book I came up with a series of notes for each f the chapters, and I decided why not publish them-!

2 chapters for each day leading up to the trial

Just... mini tangent, the comments in (brackets) are mostly for my enjoyment, but please do read them because they show how loopy I was when writing this up XD
My grammar in this bit is terrible and there are probably mistakes but what the hell.

1st day:
Chap one has remus and Logan getting to know each other better, putting a hold on experiments - spend the day walking around the village and buying random cakes from the bakery ect
Chap two they are back home, logan meeting Janus properly and getting to know them. (Add something else if you wanna... like I have no ideas right now so its up to you future payton) pillow fight.....?

2nd day:
Chap one they do some more experiments with Remus' magic - remus doing so hesitantly but using it to charm logan.
Chap two loganberry teaches remus to read because remus (is a little dim) wasn't taught as a child. Dey kith :D

3rd day:
Chap one they visit Remus' family on the other side of the village, who scorn him and tell him to leave. Logan defends him and they allow him to stay. Whilst logan is talking to the parents, remus goes to his brothers room.
Chap two: logan finds remus and he tells him about roman and what happened. They go home as it gets dark, laying awake on Remus' bed. They kiss after some fluff... and then s e x. (Maybe hehehe)

The trial:
Chap 1:Remus goes to the castle with Logan and receives the time of his trial - before the time is up Remus is dragged away, leaving Logan and cant be found.
Chap 2: Remus is bound by his wrists and ankles in a dark room, where two "guards" stand before him. They buwwy him but leave his pretty face alone. Then remus is thrown back out and taken to his trial.
Chap 3: Remus is held in front of family and friends, public can see his very beaten up torso and legs. Trial commences and he just mutters guilty, before dying. Do some heartfelt shot with Logan.

The trial (original idea):
Remus goes to the castle and is held in front of the whole kingdom, his friends and loved ones, and the royal family. Logan watches from beside his brother, as she orders for remus to state his name and plea. Remus says guilty because... whats the point any more, and he dies. Logan yells at his mother, confesses his feelings and leaves the ceremony to go cry in his room like a baby, leaving the others in shock. (I didn't mean that logan I love you, but it was necessary)

Le funerál 
Janus hosts a funeral for re re, and logan turns up with patton, who is there to look after janus. The three of them talk about how much they'll miss him, (not so much patton, he didn't really know him, the little bitc-). Then dun dun dun the parents show up and say some shut about how much they love him and how they were bad parents because happy endings and shizzle i guess.

(the actual chapter differed a little from my plan- whoopsie-)

Whoo, its the end
Time skip to like, 3 years later, Logan is in his room telling stories to Janus and Pattons children (:0) about Remus. And then there's a knock on his balcony door and who is it? Why its remus of course, and it ends with Logan just saying "Remus?!" (Because cliffhanger) - onto book two!

(Write ideas for book two in a separate chapter and don't publish them because spoilers shhh)

(Book two was a shower thought so like, ya, make sure you remember it doofus)

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