So something I've realized is that for some parts of the book I've either used it once and never again or I might have contradicted myself with it. Whatever it is, I wanna fix it, so sometime later I'm gonna go back and kinda revise or just make some edits to some chapters because I wasn't happy with the way they turned out or I rushed through it. One of the things I'll definitely be doing is fixing up prologue which I'm sure I've said before, I might try to add some more details to some chapters, and I might remove one of the characters and replace them with another one I got an idea of. The character in question is Anthony, I added him in cause I wanted a full team and all but I never really gave it a thought about who to add in and chose him. I've already got an idea for a replacement and obviously I'm gonna go back and replace the times I mentioned him and fix them up. I really want my story to make sense and I want you all who read this to enjoy it. Now, another thing I'm gonna do is also try to make the story lengthier so I might add in some chapters where they don't offer much but they add in just that little much depth into the story. I still need to make a chapter where all of Team SHDW bond and just have a guys night out and I also need to start having Archer and the girls make moves intentionally or not. Oh, and as I said earlier I wanna fix all the things I used unintentionally as gimmicks or one of deals (that's probably the same thing but idk) I do wanna continue using some things and I'm gonna try to do so. And also I'm sorry about just randomly dropping the whole 'Glynda asking out Ozpin' thing for the 'Ripper Mode' explanation chapter, I couldn't really think of a way to implement it to where it makes sense but I'll try to fix that up too. I'm planning on that whole thing for an entirely separate subplot that'll tie into the story too. And also I noticed I haven't had Archer use his semblance and I realise that for my future plans of this book to work it'll be extremely useless for him to have it so I'll just make Ripper Mode or something entirely different his semblance. I also noticed I haven't used Sarah or his uncle John, I'm gonna try to use them in some other chapters but we'll see. And also whenever Archer gets access to something new whether it be an outfit or weapon I might make a short chapter explaining it and I'll have it like you're reading a file about it. Oh and I'm sorry about not updating, school really is a pain in my ass and it's not letting me get chapters out so chapters will be probably on hold for a while or at the very least very slow. Alright well, that's all I wanted to get off of my chest from what I remember that for sure was it. I just made this to explain what's been going on as of recently because I wanted to let you guys know that no, I'm not giving up on this book nor am I abandoning it, I'm just very busy but I'm trying. Well that's all I wanted to say so hang in there guys, so with that being said, this is Jack signing off!
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Splinter Cell: Light In The Shadows | Splinter Cell Male Reader x RWBY Harem
FanfictionMy first ever story so go easy on me with this. Also the cover was made by my absolutely talented friend so complete credit to her. Also RWBY belongs to Rooster Teeth, Splinter Cell belongs to Ubisoft and any video game I make references or nods to...