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Icetalon

This OC belongs to MistleSong

Name┃ Icetalon (Currently Icekit in the upcoming book)

5/5 Lovely name; Ice- isn't used enough as far as I've seen. -Talon is a very strong personality suffix (or in this case, a good leader one.)

Previous Names┃ Icekit, Icepaw, Icecreek

I really like Icecreek, it sounds very nice.

Name Reasoning┃

Ice- her frosty ice colored pelt.

Do you mean icy as in blue, or icy as in white/grey?

Creek- her sea colored eyes

Be wary with any sort of blue eyes! If you're going for accuracy (which is, of course, not required!) then a cat MUST have white on their face, with the exception of Russian Blues (occasionally) and the extremely rare Ojos Azules.

Talon- Because that's their clan's leader suffix

It's very creative! However, I can't really understand how -Talon correlates with GlacierClan-- unless birds are sacred to them, or something similar.

Gender┃ She-cat

Age┃ 1 moon when she's introduced

All right! This is a place to be wary, however. In real life, kittens don't really get their personalities until 10 weeks, and she wouldn't be able to eat solid food or really even leave her mother-- they don't even explore short distances until 6 weeks.

Here's a guide: (https://www.wellnesspetfood.com/blog/kitten-development-milestones)

You'll have to copy-paste the URL into google, but it works pretty well!

Clan┃ (Current clan) Glacierclan - A cold tundra with often snow. (Former clan) Fernclan - A flattish forest with TONS of bush's and ferns.

Quick tip: If you're going with the canon way, clan names are spelled like this: ThunderClan, GlacierClan, FernClan. (Though warrior names are still like you did them.)

I love these names!

Appearance┃ A frosty ice colored pelt Clear sea colored eyes, big fluffy ears, and a fluffy pelt.

Her fluffy ears and pelt seem well-adapted to her environment, though, as I said above, be wary with the eye colour.

Likes┃ Fishing, being near the ice or up in tree

I like these! I would imagine that the ice would bring some danger, as thin ice is always a pretty big hazard. (It is beautiful, though.) Fishing would be a very different experience in the cold!

Dislikes┃ Fighting

This is good! I would maybe add one or two more things, though-- maybe she dislikes hot weather due to her fluffy coat, for example!

Personality┃ Thinks thinks things through, Kind, Generous

These are a good start; however, she may need a few more traits (and at least some flaws to balance it out!)

Here are some examples:

- A little bit too selfless and clingy. (Can give too much to others at her own detriment.)

- Slow to make decisions.

- Passive

- Hesitant and shy.