Barrister Babu fanfiction awards 2022
A fanfiction award for all the anidita lovers.
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TOTAL: 71.5/100
Hi Khushi this is Anshu. This is what I really felt after reading your book. So here are my reviews about it
OVERALL PLOT: I enjoyed the plot how you showed a friendship turned into a relationship with a little ups and downs as in every relationship. But I felt plots repeating and weak so I deducted marks there.
LANGUAGE AND STYLE : Coming straight to the point I felt as if I am going through someone's diary and not a story also the initial 5-6 chapter were a repeat of the previous chapter with just another person's pov. So that was boring. Tip : Do write a story from writer's pov aur known as third person's pov. Only use First person's pov when you specially need to show how that particular person is feeling otherwise the story will turn to diary. Hope you get that.
GRAMMAR: Marks are deducted due to some grammatical mistakes and spelling. Do re read before publishing.
DESCRIPTION OF SCENES: Very beautiful described every scene though it was missing in some parts but overall very nice.
COVER : No doubt cover is very beautiful and eye catching
BLURB: There was no blurb on the age of the main characters were mentioned and the sub title of the story so marks are only given for that. Do write that.
EMOTIONAL ATTACHMENT: This was thing was lagging in many parts try to make the plot a little more interesting and do use cliffhangers a little more to make readers curious and attached to the character.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: There was very less character development of the male lead only a lot bit change in his character whereas could clearly see the female character being developed constantly with the story.
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: Would surely recommended everyone for reading this book. Also the mature scenes were written beautiful. Do think about that.
