Barrister Babu fanfiction awards 2022
A fanfiction award for all the anidita lovers.
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TOTAL: 71.5/100
Review:
The cover of the story was just designed amazingly, moving onto the blurb or the description of the story which plays the vital role in any story, the blurb was same as to the theme of the show, which is important to be highlighted but as there's always a room for improvement so you can put a quote or the basic idea of OS there (I noticed that most of the one shots were based on mythological characters, so you can put up something related to that)
About The Story:
The idea for the each OS was worth reading, as everything, along with the storyline was unique and amazing.
"The Special Bond" is my personal favourite OS from your book, as it did wonders to me while reading, as it was clearly imaginable to me and written fluently.
You definitely have wild imaginations but where you lacked is now something I want you to know for your future projects and become constructive as a writer.
In the initial chapters, the whole chapter was completed in single long paragraph, or single long paragraph and a closing line / dialogue at the end, which I found inappropriate. The paragraph can be divided into chunks, and as the book progressed, in last chapter I found that the paragraph started with the continuation of last line like:
"Bondita: She woke up suddenly and is profusely sweating
she started sobbing and even didn't made a slight sound so as her husband sleeping beside
her does not wakes up"
The description of scenes and feelings in single paragraph made it tough for me (and readers) to read, and that's where readers can lack their interest, as the book is marked complete, you can work on it as your wish.
In the latter One Shots like, "Exchange Of Unsaid Emotions" and "His Soulmate", these one shots are inspired from the mythological characters Radha, Krishna, Balram, Ram and Sita, and I could see the use of same names at certain points instead of Anirudh, Bondita and Som (Balram) without any mention.
Coming to the OS, "The Letter Of Love", the OS is set in during the times of Mughals, and there's constant use of "Dada" for Som (according to the storyline). "Dada" is a Bengal word used for addressing elder brother, and therefore keeping the era of Mughals in mind, "Dada" isn't the appropriate word to be used here instead you can use "Bhaijaan".
Next in the OS, "The First Night Together", the dialogues of Anirudh and Bondita were mixed altogether, confusing me (any reader) for a moment.
Overall Review:
The plot of the book is just amazing, except minor misspelled words, but you can definitely work on the chunked paragraphs, and basically the description of scenes.
I hope my criticism will help you develop as a writer, kindly let me know incase of any doubts regarding my judgement.
