Barrister Babu fanfiction awards 2022
A fanfiction award for all the anidita lovers.
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TOTAL: 96/100
Dear Manalee sis, your book is a masterpiece, but it has its own pros and cons. So, this is an honest review of your book according to my observation.
🌟 REVIEW :
☆ Introduction -
1) The first thing that comes in any story is the Title. And your title is really attention-grabbing! It attracts the reader to read your story. No other title can be better than this one!!😍
2) Then, the Blurb. Your blurb is just the perfect. Although, it's difficult to write a nice blurb for an OS series, still you've written an amazing blurb. You're so talented girl!🐣🐣
3) Next comes the Cover. Here, I've to say that your cover looks so simple. I don't know who are the people in the cover pic, but the pic looks nice. Just a little bit of editing is required, and your cover will become eye-catching!
☆ Story
Now, coming to the story. First of all, I'll say that you've penned this story so beautifully and magically, that it mesmerises your readers. You've got a great skill to enchant your readers with your writings! Still, there are a few errors in your story as nothing can be absolutely perfect in this world. I hope that pointing out those errors will help you in your further writings.
1) The very first thing I loved about your story are the titles of your chapters!!! They're really awesome!♥️♥️
2) The songs you've mentioned, they're a perfect combination with your story. The lyrics are very apt.
3) Then, your descriptions!!😍😍😍 Ah, I've no words to say! It's a pure bliss. You've written the descriptions so well, that I could clearly imagine each and every moment of your story. You've described everything really heavenly. Keep up your amazing talent of writing descriptions!!👍
4) Your writings are so mind-blowing that I didn't get only emotionally attached to your story, but I felt like I am witnessing everything in front of my eyes! The way you described AniDita's dance in the 3rd OS, is really commendable!!!❣
5) Your plots are amazing! Your stories have a very good pace. 6) I loved your comparison of thunder and lightning with unknowledgeable and knowledgeable persons.
7) Now, the errors. There's no error in the first OS. But, in the 2nd and 3rd OS, as you've mentioned that they're unedited, so it's obvious that there are few mistakes in it. Pointing out those - (i) The word "antique" will be used at the place you've written "antic". Because, antic means "a ridiculous,playful or funny act" while antique means "very old and valuable".
(ii) It will be ".... and bent down a little" not ".... and bend down a little".
(iii) The first form of verb is always used with did/didn't. So, the correct statement will be "didn't seem","didn't hold", instead of "didn'tseems", "didn't held".
8) There are also a few spelling mistakes like squel(squeal), lightening(lightning), glareing(glaring), receiption(reception), physic(physique), etc.
☆ Conclusion -
Overall, your story is superb! It's really intriguing and enjoyable. It's so well-written and mesmerising. I loved it sis!!🐥♥️ Most importantly, you've got an amazing talent of writing descriptions! I could clearly visualise everything in your story! It's worth reading!! All the very best for your future endeavours!!!👍❤🐣🐥
