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[Now, for everybody else, I'm sorry for this, but I couldn't announce it on my posts for reason being; Word limit 🤩✨🥳

Yeah... I hate the word limits on comments and posts 😒

Anyway this is pretty much just another question for you, because this is a serious topic (totally 😃✋)]

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Okay, so I'm over here, almost finished writing out the 6th chapter for my Fyozai fanfic, and I've had this loose, concerningly bold idea in my head. Now, as far as this upcoming chapter goes, it will only be subtle if I add it, but will gradually reveal itself maybe in the 7th chapter, or reaching into the 8th chapter. 

My mind has thought of some crazy ideas, and this has to be by far the craziest one yet. I'm afraid I can't spoil the idea, or more so, plot twist, because I'll kind of build up to it, if that makes sense? I will say I've ruled it all out, there are pros to adding this idea into the fanfic, but also cons...

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✦Now, a few pros would be ↓
1• It would likely lengthen the fanfic

2• Add a whole lot more drama both for the plot and relationship wise (I mean I can't turn that down)

3• Dazai would lash out at Fyodor, which leads to him putting their relationship on hold (this might be the case for a chapter, maybe multiple?)

4• Soukoku will be a bit more focused (as far as my mind has gone its a given at this point in time)

5• It would leave room for more character developement for Fyodor, as he'll realise he had never been playing fair when it came to Dazai

6• In terms of logic, and how I've so far built up a bit of tension and recollection on Fyodor's past would work well with this plot twist

7• (Kind of relating to N.6) You'd see more of Fyodor's past with the new characters I plan to add, and why he's abusive or why he acts the way he does

8• I think it might be fun to write out this plot twist, as well as think of and write out addtional side-ideas for it 

9• An additional character will be involved, and you just might hate her, but you might not (yes I've only disclosed the gender, but you'll learn more about her in the upcoming update, so it'll all make sense soon enough 😭) 

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A number of cons would be;
1• Fyozai wouldn't be so fixated (which is kind of what the fanfic is all about, so I feel I'd be straying away from my original ideas, but with adding more characters to play as the bad guys, it kind of drags along with that)

2• It may or may not become confusing, I think it all amounts to how good I am with unraveling these events carefully, and at a steady pace as to not shorter nor prolong them

3• Fyodor may turn out to be a not so hated character (I thought that would be a con, because everybody hates him right now) 

4• If I made a sequel, I'd have to find a way to work through it

5• This plot twist may or may not clash with my current plans for the story's plot, I mean it could complicate things, but I should be able to prevent such a disaster

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✦ Now, if I didn't add it into the story, here are the pros and cons ↓ 
 ✦Pros;
1• I wouldn't have to worry about it in the long run

2• If I were to make a sequel, it wouldn't be an obstacle/issue

3• Fyozai would still be the most focused ship

4• Fyodor's developement will be more controlled (like I wouldn't turn him into an exceptional character)

5• I could probably find a way to work around making the drama interesting without this plot twist

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Lastly, the cons;
1• The drama wouldn't be as intriguing 

2• The fanfic would not be as long as if I were to add the plot twist

3• What I plan to do without the idea may or may not sit with you as the readers

4• Dazai would be stuck with Fyodor until the end (I believe that should be classed as a con T-T)

5• Fyodor's character developement will change and I'm thinking for the worse? (I do have reasons for this decision though) 

6• If I didn't add it, Fyodor might never understand his abusive ways to Dazai (but then again, it might fit for the ending I've planned)  

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[Basically, this was all a question, on whether you guys trust me when I say this plot twist will be a major point, and will likely determine the course of the fanfic. Whether you're interested or not, isn't my call to make. 

I'd just love for you to tell me what you think, so I can figure out whether to lean toward adding it or not, but thank you so much for reading, and I'm sorry with how conflicted I always am when it comes to adding something big to this fanfic, I just like to be sure of my choice, because sometimes it can be the wrong decision. Maybe not from my perspective at the time, but from other's views. 

Hope your day is going to your liking, and that if not, tomorrow will be a little brighter for you ❤]

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