I hate to take forever writing this stuff. Honestly I plan on re-writing both of these (again).
I want to immerse people more into the world.
It feels like I rushed and skipped over details that I deem important, as I want to make this world in this series come to life, make anyone who reads it feel like it's something they can find themselves a part of, seeing these events from a distance.
I want to give every character that's given a name a story, past present and future, making them seem like real people instead of characters who simply appeared, reveal events leading up to the series and what they were doing before it.
These side stories could be books of their own, maybe even more than one for characters that are quite important. Notably Urzael, who had a hand in almost everything that led to the eventually "multiversal level" that the series will spread to.
If you find yourself interested in these stories, please comment what you want to see next, my priority is remaking this and the first book, most likely spread into more than two books, unless I up the word count quite a lot, with a much catchier name. I'm thinking the "Multiverse of Magic" for a proper name for this for what it will expand to eventually.
I'm going to stick to a 20 chapter rule, I'm going to experiment with how much content I put into each chapter. As I feel 1000 words per chapter is either watering it down or too much depending on what the story for the chapter is, but I definitely want to try and keep it pretty even as far as how many words are in each chapter. Mainly because I feel like it's annoying from a reader's perspective to have this massive wall of text for one chapter then the next being like, one page. Yeah that's a little extreme of a measurement though you get the idea.
That is all, I'm probably going to leave this message here forever, mainly because, again, I want to remake this book with an much better and more relatable to the story cover I made myself instead of AI (I hate me too, it's a nice tool to make a reference image though.)
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Magic chronicles 2: Rise of the empire
FantasyWhen Surtr was defeated, Sora started a nation, the magic empire. The strongest mages make up a council known as the mage lords, and Sora, at the top, is the mage king. Chino has been exploring a very long time, and she has found many things, but sh...