I'm having a lot of motivation, so I'm writing another chapter. Can you guys also tell me if the are grammatical mistakes? I made this on my phone, so that's why. I hope you guys enjoy!
~chapter start~
As Error and Nightmare's gang reached his house, Killer gasped.
"Wow Error, you have a really big house! How did you get it? Did you steal it?" Killer asked, looking at Error.
"Of course I didn't steal it! I bought it because our currency in the previous multiverse it worth a lot here." Error explained, offended that Killer thought he stole it.
"Oh, that's great! I have a lot of coins on me right now. I actually took all the coins from Nightmare's castle." Killer told him, holding the big pouch of coins.
"Well, it's good that you took it. But I'm not saying it's good to steal from the others Killer." Nightmare scolded him.
"Yes boss, but it's good that I did it, so why does it matter?" Killer asked, not getting what did he do wrong.
"Whatever, but let's go in!" Cross said, taking Dust's hand and dragging him into the house.
When they entered the house, they looked around.
"Error, this is nice. Where are our rooms?" Dust asked him, wanting to check out the bedrooms.
"They are over there. We're gonna have to go shopping to buy new furniture for you're rooms. I already have mine decorated, so you guys can customize yours too" Error said. "But no stealing!"
"Ugh fine, we promise won't steal!" Killer promised.
"Good.Do you guys want to go now or later?" Error asked them.
"Let's go later. We need to sign up for that school of yours anyway. Let's just get it out of the way." Nightmare decided. "How are we gonna do it?"
"Through the internet. But first, I gotta visit Granny G cause I forgot to." Error said, scratching his head.
"Ok, we'll just wait here."
Error walked out of his house and walked towards Granny G's house. When he reached her front door, he knocked on it.
"Yes? Oh Mystic, I haven't seen you in a while! Have you been eating well?" Granny G asked, checking if he's healthy.
"Yes, thanks to you, I ate healthy." Error answered.
"That's good. Here, I have a jar of cookies in my kitchen, let me go get it for you." Granny G went into her kitchen and came back with a jar of his favorite cookies.
"Here you are dear. Thank you for visiting me, you must've been busy."
"No, I haven't been that busy. I apologize because I forgot about you Granny." Error apologized, feeling bad about it.
"It's okay, but please visit me more often. At least once every two weeks ok? I need to check on you. Have you made any friends?" Granny G asked him.
"Yes, I did. I also have found some of my old friends, I'll maybe introduce them the next time I come." Error said.
"Ok dear. Do you want to come in or you want to go to your house now?"
"I'll go back. Thanks for the cookies Granny!" Error thanked her and bid goodbye walking back to his house.
"Guys, I'm back!" Error shouted.
He heard footsteps going down the stairs, so he placed the jar into the kitchen and went to the stairs.
"So are we gonna sign up for that school?" Nightmare asked.
"Oh, yeah we will. Just let me get my laptop."
~chapter end~
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Another extra chapter. Hopefully I don't run out of motivation.
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