Twist of fate-Teen wolf [Derek Hale mate]

Question that needs to be answer

Hey guys it's Kayla so I'm writing the first episode of season three but I have a question should I continue writing the story how I've been writing giving you actions and not dialogue or should I write it with dialogue and action together kind of like this

Scott, Stiles and Miracle get in the car with stiles car. Stiles has a ice pack on his head when Miracle and him noticed Scott squirming in his seat "You okay?" Stiles asked. Scott nods his head "Kind of burns"

Like that or this

{Scott, Stiles and Miracle get in the car with stiles car. Stiles has a ice pack on his head when Miracle and him noticed Scott squirming in his seat}

Stiles: You okay?

{Scott nods}

Scott: Kind of burns

They're still gonna be action and then like you're gonna know what's happening but I wanna know if I should have the characters talk more or keep it the same cause I feel like you as the readers don't really get the full story if you haven't watch the shows so I want to make it better for you guys and then when expand my creative writing so I want you guys pick which version should I do version one on top or version two on the bottom?